1. “I started with the Theravāda” → “I started with Theravāda” • Removed “the” as it is not needed when referring to Buddhist traditions in general. 2. “she studied Zen in Japan” → “who studied Zen in Japan” • Corrected to “who” to properly link the relative clause to the trainer. 3. “before my grandmother passed away” → “Before my grandmother passed away” • Capitalized the first letter for proper sentence structure. 4. “she still chanted “Amitabha Buddha” three times with an oxygen mask and many other devices” → “she still chanted ‘Amitabha Buddha’ three times while using an oxygen mask and many other devices” • Reworded for clarity and smoother sentence flow. 5. “she didn’t know the meaning because she was illiterate. But we can see how deep Buddhism goes in our culture.” → “She didn’t know the meaning because she was illiterate, but we can see how deeply Buddhism is rooted in our culture.” • Reworded to make the phrasing sound more natural and meaningful.

Good job! It was really interesting to learn about your background in Buddhism. Some of your sentences were perfect grammatically but didn't sound very natural, so I made some slight edits to make your writing a bit more natural.