Isabella
I watched a video today online. After I finished watching, I was so upset that I nearly burst into tears. In the video was a small kitten just like my cat Cream Puff, but this kitten is a thousand times more obedient. The kitten in the video knew how to shake hands with its owner and how to do a high five! I spent at least 10 days teaching my kitten how to use the cat litter tray. The thing that upset me most of all is the fact that the kitten in the video did exercises with its owner following a special app that devised ways for owners and pets to do exercises together. I tried to do that once with Cream Puff but he just stared at me coldly and bite me once on the arm before walking away with his head held high and a very smug look on its face.
1 apr 2022 09:02
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I watched a video today online. After I finished watching, I was so upset that I nearly burst into tears. In the video, there was a small kitten just like my cat Cream Puff, but this kitten was a thousand times more obedient. The kitten in the video knew how to shake hands with its owner and how to do a high five! I spent at least 10 days teaching my kitten how to use the cat litter tray. The thing that upset me most of all is the fact that the kitten in the video did exercises with its owner following a special app that devised ways for owners and pets to do exercises together. I tried to do that once with Cream Puff but he just stared at me coldly and bit me once on the arm before walking away with his head held high and a very smug look on its face. That's an amusing piece of writing! Be careful with tenses - is/was. You can use either present or past tense when you are talking about the video, but try not to mix them up. Your third sentence would sound more natural if you changed the word order to "There was a small kitten in the video, just like my cat......." I hope this helps, Victoria
1 aprile 2022
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