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Task: Write an article about a Family celebration 120-180words Suppose you had a family spread over the world that you rarely meet with. In my family it is very difficul to coordinate all of us for a family meeting, even to blow the candles in a birthday is difficult for all of us to attend, but that is not as bad as you may think. Not to see your relatives is quite hard, but not all of it is horrble. The great thing is that we meet up just for no reason, maybe a random Wenesday just because we can. We know best how to celebrate we have each other. Mi grandmother spent all morning just cooking for us and every single plate is like food for Gods. Mi uncle tells jokes all the time and my cousins show us pictures of the country they live at that moment. The time pass with hurry when all of us meet up because we are enjoying those beautiful moment we have together. At the end, we all know that some of us have to go the next day to its current country in where they work and it is a little sad just yo know that it might pass a long time since we can get together the next time, but it is fine because when it happen is like an eclipse. It worth the time to wait.
2 giu 2015 11:20
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Task: Write an article about a Family celebration 120-180words

Suppose that you had a family spread over the world that you rarely meet caught up with.
In my family it is very difficult to coordinate all of us for a family meeting gathering (meeting is quite formal), even to blow the candles in out on a birthday is difficult challenging for all of us to attend  (you could omit this for effect), but that is not as bad as you may think. Not to see seeing your relatives is quite hard, but not all of it is horrble. The great thing is that we meet up just for no reason, maybe a random Wednesday just because we can.

We know best how to celebrate (something is missing here) we have each other. Mi My grandmother spent spends all morning just cooking for us and every single plate is like food for Gods. Mi My uncle tells jokes all the time and my cousins show us pictures of the country which they live at that moment. The time pass with hurry when all of us meet up because we are enjoying those beautiful moment we have together. (I wasn't sure which tense you wanted to be in, whether this was habitual or a one of description)

At the end of the day, we all know that some of us have to go/leave the next day to its their current country in where they work and it is a little sad just yto know that it might pass may be a long time since until we can get together the next time again, but it is fine because when it happens, it is like an eclipse. It is well worth the time to wait.

2 giugno 2015

Task: Write an article about a Family celebration 120-180words

Suppose you had a family spread over the world that you rarely met with.
In my family it is very difficul to coordinate all of us for a family meeting, even to blow out the candles in a birthday because it is difficult for all of us to attend, but that is not as bad as you may think. Not to see your relatives is quite hard, but not all of it is horrible. The great thing is that we meet up just for no reason, maybe a random Wenesday, just because we can.

We know best how to celebrate: We have each other. Miygrandmother spent all morning just cooking for us and every single plate is like food for the gods. My uncle tells jokes all the time and my cousins show us pictures of the country they live in at that moment. The time passes without being rushed when all of us meet because we are enjoying those beautiful moments that we have together.

At the end, we all know that some of us have to leave the next day for the current country in where they work, and it is a little sad just, you know, that it might be a long time until we can get together the next time, but it is fine because when it happen is like an eclipse. It worth the time to wait.

2 giugno 2015
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