IS THE INTERNET BAD FOR YOUNG PEOPLE?

Nowadays it's easier than ever to access the internet, whether you are using a computer, phone or tablet. Now, There are several devices and ways to access the cloud. So that As a consequence, many young people spend a lot of time online, with both positive and negative consequences.

One advantage of the internet is that young people can use it for doing their researches and schoolwork of ín an easier way than before. This often helps teenagers to improve their knowledge about many topics. Another positive aspect of the internet is that people can use it to improve their knowledge about of foreign languages. There are many places on Internet to find partners with whom you can exchange your mother tongue by with their languages. It is an easy way to meet people and improve your speaking abilities.

On the other hand, there also negative consequences. Some young people become addicted to online gaming and using social networks all the time. That People might even forget to keep in touch with real people friends (to avoid repeating people). Many of this younger people generation spend more time texting with online friends than chatting face-to-face with them, due to as such new forms of relationships are becoming more popular.

To sum up, the using of internet should be controlled by parents. It is necessary avoid an overuse of this powerful tool. If the internet is used properly, the advantages are upper than outwiegh the disadvantages.

As far I am concerned, the Internet is the most important invention over last years.

IS THE INTERNET BAD FOR YOUNG PEOPLE?

Nowadays it is easier than ever to access the internet, whether you are using a computer, phone or tablet. Now, there are several devices and ways to access the cloud. So that For that reason*, many young people spend a lot of time online, with both positive and negative consequences.

An excellent introduction!  

*In Spanish I think you can say, Así que, in English we would say:

For that reason, As a result, As a consequence, Consequently etc etc!

IS THE INTERNET BAD FOR YOUNG PEOPLE?  Is The Internet Bad for Young People

Nowadays is easier than ever to access the internet, whether you are using a computer, phone or tablet. Now, there are several devices and ways to access the cloud. So that, many young people spent a lot of time online, with both positive and negative consequences.

One advantage of the internet is that young people can use it for doing their researches and schoolwork of an easier way than before. This often helps teenagers to improve their knowledge about many topics. Another positive aspect of the internet is that people can use it to improve their knowledge about foreign languages. There are many places on Internet to find partners who you can exchange your mother tongue by their languages. It is an easy way to meet people and improve your speaking abilities.

On the other hand, there also negative consequences. Some young people become addicted to online gaming and using social networks all the time. That people might forget to keep in touch with real people. Many of these young people spent more time texting with online friends than chatting with them, due to new forms of relationships are become more popular.

To sum up, the using of internet should be controlled by parents. It is necessary avoid an overuse of this powerful tool. If the internet is used properly, the advantages are upper than disadvantages.

As far I am concerned, the Internet is the most important invention over last years.

IS THE INTERNET BAD FOR YOUNG PEOPLE?

Nowadays it is easier than ever to access the internet, whether you are using a computer, phone or tablet. Now, there are also several devices and ways to access the cloud. Consequently, many young people spent a lot of time online. This has both positive and negative consequences.

One advantage of the internet is that it has made doing research for schoolwork a lot faster and easier for young people that it was before. This often helps teenagers to improve their knowledge about many topics. Another positive aspect of the internet is that people can use it to improve their knowledge about foreign languages. There are many places on the Internet to find partners who you can exchange your mother tongue by their languages [I don't really understand what you are trying to say here, but this sentence doesn't make much sense. Maybe say; 'There are many places on the Internet to find partners who you can talk to in your mother tongue or in a foreign language.']. It is an easy way to meet people and improve your speaking abilities.

On the other hand, there also negative consequences. Some young people become addicted to online gaming and using social networks [you could also say 'media', but what you have written still makes sense] all the time. Also, people might forget to keep in touch with real people. Many young people spend more time texting their friends online than chatting with them face to face. Due to the internet, these new forms of relationships are becoming more popular.

To sum up, the usage of the internet by teenagers should be monitored [I think this is a better word to use for what you are trying to say] by parents. It is necessary avoid overusing of this powerful tool. If the internet is used properly, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

As far I am concerned, the Internet is the most important invention of the last few years.

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