Anne
“Give me a ticket to my childhood” - quote from a famous author in Vietnam. Childhood is the best time of our life when we do not have much responsibilities and concerns. If there were a piece of ticket to childhood, I would not hesitate to get one in order to comeback those time to laugh and play with my friends. I believe that the funniest time of childhood is summer because of school break. In my childhood, summer is also the rain season. Therefore, my friend and I play and laugh together in rain. We roll ourselves in wet grass. And we caught crickets. (these small insects only have in summer) and let two crickets fight with each other. Also, we play many traditional games such as hide and seek, fly a kite..Playing traditional games not only brings us funny experience but also equips us with team work spirit in future. In my opinion, the most precious thing I has in my childhood is the freedom to play even the craziest things. However, nowadays, children seem not to be enjoyed their summer like me before. Most parents force their children to attend summer class which reduces children play time. Also, some parents do not permit their children to take part in outside activities due to the fact that in summer serious accidents happen with children much more than in school time. Futhermore, it is difficult for children of poor family to experience happy time of childhood in summer. I am sure that the image of a school boy who must work in summer break to earn money will touch your deep heart. It is the fact that many children spend their childhood to make a living rather than playing in protection of adults. I wonder whether we should criticise parents of those poor child when they let their children work instead of playing. I find no answer for this question but I wish that every child could enjoy their summer time with many activities. For example, rural children could go to urban areas to visit museum, zoo, park, ect. In contrast, urban children may go to rural areas to see how beautiful a countryside is. The journey will enrich children 's world view, give them more confidence. To sum up, children should have their summer to play as much as possibe. We only have childhood one time in the entire life. When we grow up, now matter how much times we want to get a ticket to childhood, we almost could not find one! I think that parents should creat the best condition for their children to grown up with happy childhood. I strongly believe that a happy childhood could make one become a better person in future.
23 giu 2015 18:43
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“Give me a ticket to my childhood” - quote from a famous author in Vietnam.

Childhood is the best time of our life LIVES when we do not have much many responsibilities and concerns. If there were WAS a piece of ticket BACK to childhood, I would not hesitate to get one in order to GOcomeback TO those time to laugh and play with my friends. I believe that the funniest MOST ENJOYABLE time of childhood is summer because of school break.

In my childhood, summer is WAS also the rain season. Therefore, my friend and I playED and laughED together in THE rain. We rollED ourselves in wet grass, (COMMA) and we caught crickets (these small insects only have in summer) and let two crickets fight with each other.  (CRICKETS ARE SMALL INSECTS WE ONLY HAVE IN THE SUMMER.) Also, we playED many traditional games such as hide and seek AND fly a kite..Playing traditional games not only brings BROUGHT us funny experienceS but also equipsED us with A SPIRIT OF team work spirit in FOR THE future. In my opinion, the most precious thing I hasD in my childhood is WAS the freedom to play even the craziest things. 


However, nowadays, children seem not to be enjoyedING their summer like me before I USED TO. Most parents force their children to attend summer class which reduces children play time. Also, some parents do not permit their children to take part in outside activities due to the fact that in summer, serious accidents happen with children much more than in school time. Futhermore, it is difficult for children of poor familyIES to experience THE happy time of childhood in THE summer. I am sure that the image of a school boy who must work in DURING summer break to earn money will touch your deep heart DEEPLY. It is the A fact that many children spend their childhood to make a living rather than playing in UNDER THE protection of adults. I wonder whether we should criticise parents of those poor child when they let their children work instead of playing.

I find no answer for this question but I wish that every child could enjoy their summer time with many activities. For example, rural children could go to urban areas to visit museumS, zooS, parkS, ect. In contrast, urban children may COULD go to rural areas to see how beautiful a THE countryside is. The journey will WOULD enrich A child's world view, AND give them HIM more confidence.

To sum up, children should have their summer to play as much as possibe. We only have childhood one time in the OUR entire life LIVES. When we grow up, know NO matter how much MANY times we want to get a ticket BACK to childhood, we almost could not NEVER find one! I think that parents should creatE the best conditionS for their children to grown up with A happy childhood. I strongly believe that a happy childhood could make one become a better person in THE future.

24 giugno 2015
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