Ananas
Paper aeroplane of 365 days / 365天的纸飞机:诗歌 (1) Looking up at the morning sky, I wished I can spend smiling on this day 仰望着早上的天空,祈祷了这一天生活中脸上能带着微笑 Sometimes, rain falls, and tears overflow. But days when things don't go according to plan, make me want to strive tomorrow. 时而会下雨、也会溢出泪水。但不如所愿的那一天,会决心努力在下一天 The dream I've always had is to be someone who is free to do whatever she wants. 我一直看着一场梦,是另有一个我,想做的事都能自由做得到 Life is a paper airplane, flying on with my wishes. Just progressing with all its might against the wind. 人生是纸飞机,载着愿望飞过去。在风中只管尽力前进 Rather than compete for distance, how I flew, where do I fly to, those are the most important. 与其比比距离,不如怎样飞过,哪里飞过,这些才是重要吧 Come, like my heart, 365 days 来,随心做一下,365天 (2) How many stars can I see? Or is it the night where nothing can be seen? 是能看到多少星星,还是什么都看不到的夜晚 When I can't bring up my energy, I'll talk with someone. 精神振不起,这样的时候,和谁谈谈吧 Humans are not as alone as they think. Just unable to notice the kindness right beside them. 人人身旁都有温柔,只不过他们没意识到 Life is a paper airplane, flying on with love. Everyone will look up these wings you spread with confidence. 人生是纸飞机,载着爱情在飞着。大家将仰望看,你自信展开的翅膀 Even if you don't know how to fold one, you'll be able to let it fly without noticing. That is the hope and the motivation. 即使你现在不知折法,也不知不觉中能让它起飞,这就是希望吧 Come, like my heart, 365 days. 来,快乐做一下,365天 Song:365日の紙飛行機 *也许会有专家的翻译,但为学习自己翻译一下。
27 feb 2016 16:55
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Paper aeroplane of 365 days / 365天的纸飞机:诗歌

(1) Looking up at the morning sky, I wished I can spend smiling on this day
仰望着早的天空,祈祷这一天生活脸上能带着微笑/都能盡情地笑

Sometimes, rain falls, and tears overflow. But days when things don't go according to plan, make me want to strive tomorrow.
时而会下雨、也会溢出泪水(/有時外面下著雨,而我的眼淚也跟著泛濫)。但不如所愿的那一天日子裡使我决心努力在下一每個明天

The dream I've always had is to be someone who is free to do whatever she wants.
我一直看着一场梦,是另有一个我,想做的事都能自由做得到 (/我一直有個夢,夢想成為一個能隨心所願的人。)

Life is a paper airplane, flying on with my wishes. Just progressing with all its might against the wind.
人生是纸飞机,载着愿望飞过去(/承載著希望持續地飛翔)。在风中只管尽力前进(/藉著風的阻力不斷地前進)

Rather than compete for distance, how I flew, where do I fly to, those are the most important.
与其比距离,不如怎样,<em>飞过</em>/哪里,这些才是重要

Come, like my heart, 365 days
来(吧),随心做一下,365天

(2) How many stars can I see? Or is it the night where nothing can be seen?
是能看到多少星星,还是什么都看不到的夜晚

When I can't bring up my energy, I'll talk with someone.
精神<em></em>振,这样的时候,和谁/人谈谈吧

Humans are not as alone as they think. Just unable to notice the kindness right beside them.
人人身旁都有温柔,只不过他们没意识到 (/人們不是他們想的那樣可以獨善其身, 他們只是沒能注意到自身周遭的幫助)

Life is a paper airplane, flying on with love. Everyone will look up these wings you spread with confidence.
人生像是纸飞机,载着爱情在飞着(/因著愛而飛)。大家将仰望,你自信展开的翅膀

Even if you don't know how to fold one, you'll be able to let it fly without noticing. That is the hope and the motivation.
即使你现在不知折法,也<em></em>不知不觉中让它起飞,这就是希望(和動力)吧

Come, like my heart, 365 days.
来,快乐做一下,365天

Song:365日の紙飛行機
*也许会有专家的翻译,但为学习自己翻译一下。

29 febbraio 2016
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Just a draft

Paper aeroplane of 365 days / 365天的纸飞机:诗歌

(1) Looking up at the morning sky, I wished I can spend smiling on this day 举頭望曉天,  但愿此日笑
仰望着早上的天空,祈祷了这一天生活中脸上能带着微笑



Sometimes, rain falls, and tears overflow. But days when things don't go according to plan, make me want to strive tomorrow.
时而会下雨、也会溢出泪水。但不如所愿的那一天,会决心努力在下一天 雨下泪水溢, 今日事不意, 明朝努力求

The dream I've always had is to be someone who is free to do whatever she wants.
我一直看着一场梦,是另有一个我,想做的事都能自由做得到 夢为一人者, 万事自由如

Life is a paper airplane, flying on with my wishes. Just progressing with all its might against the wind.
人生是纸飞机,载着愿望飞过去。在风中只管尽力前进人生紙飞机, 飞在意愿上,  逆风努力前
Rather than compete for distance, how I flew, where do I fly to, those are the most important.
与其比比距离,不如怎样飞过,哪里飞过,这些才是重要吧 莫赛距离远, 只顧如何飞, 只顧何处飞

Come, like my heart, 365 days 来来如我心, 一年天天長, 三百六十五
来,随心做一下,365天

(2) How many stars can I see? Or is it the night where nothing can be seen?
是能看到多少星星,还是什么都看不到的夜晚 星星多少看, 或夜冥什不見

When I can't bring up my energy, I'll talk with someone.
精神振不起,这样的时候,和谁谈谈吧 慵懶無力时, 与人談一談

Humans are not as alone as they think. Just unable to notice the kindness right beside them.
人人身旁都有温柔,只不过他们没意识到 莫想人非寡, 傍善 不曉悟

Life is a paper airplane, flying on with love. Everyone will look up these wings you spread with confidence.
人生是纸飞机,载着爱情在飞着。大家将仰望看,你自信展开的翅膀 人生紙飞机, 飞在憐惜上,  信賴飞翼望, 人人誰不賞

Even if you don't know how to fold one, you'll be able to let it fly without noticing. That is the hope and the motivation.
即使你现在不知折法,也不知不觉中能让它起飞,这就是希望吧 虽摺折不识, 仍可飞不觉, 愿望激励也

Come, like my heart, 365 days.
来,快乐做一下,365天

Song:365日の紙飛行機
*也许会有专家的翻译,但为学习自己翻译一下。

1 marzo 2016
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My translation of the first poem :)   I'm still learning English,so.......

举头青天,愿成夙愿。

雨打屋檐,从心之迁。

梦中之物,恬然穆穆。

玄牝有子,不离其根。

空有不居,不拔我心。


27 febbraio 2016
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Paper aeroplane of 365 days / 365天的纸飞机:诗歌

(1) Looking up at the morning sky, I wished I can spend smiling on this day
仰望着早上的天空,祈祷了这一天生活中脸上能带着微笑

期盼我能笑对每一天(虽然英语是“on this day”,但是主题是365天,于是我改成“每一天”)

Sometimes, rain falls, and tears overflow. But days when things don't go according to plan, make me want to strive tomorrow.
时而会下雨、也会溢出泪水。但不如所愿的那一天,会决心努力在下一天

The dream I've always had is to be someone who is free to do whatever she wants.
我一直看着一场梦,是另有一个我,想做的事都能自由做得到

我一直梦想着,一切能如我所愿。

Life is a paper airplane, flying on with my wishes. Just progressing with all its might against the wind.
人生是纸飞机,载着愿望飞过去。在风中只管尽力前进

Rather than compete for distance, how I flew, where do I fly to, those are the most important.
与其比比距离,不如怎样飞过,哪里飞过,这些才是重要吧

Come, like my heart, 365 days
来,随心做一下,365天

追随我心的365天

(2) How many stars can I see? Or is it the night where nothing can be seen?
是能看到多少星星,还是什么都看不到的夜晚

我能阅尽多少繁星?亦或是空无一物的夜空?

When I can't bring up my energy, I'll talk with someone.
精神振不起,这样的时候,和谁谈谈吧

Humans are not as alone as they think. Just unable to notice the kindness right beside them.
人人身旁都有温柔,只不过他们没意识到

Life is a paper airplane, flying on with love. Everyone will look up these wings you spread with confidence.
人生是纸飞机,载着爱情在飞着。大家将仰望看,你自信展开的翅膀

Even if you don't know how to fold one, you'll be able to let it fly without noticing. That is the hope and the motivation.
即使你现在不知折法,也不知不觉中能让它起飞,这就是希望吧

Come, like my heart, 365 days.
来,快乐做一下,365天

释怀我心的365天

Song:365日の紙飛行機
*也许会有专家的翻译,但为学习自己翻译一下。

 

各位都改的很好啊!我就补充一点不同。

另外,我联想到一个曲子:風のうた(本田美奈子)

6 marzo 2016
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Paper aeroplane of 365 days / 365天的纸飞机:诗歌

(1) Looking up at the morning sky, I wished I can spend smiling on this day
仰望着晨空,祈祷这一整天中脸上都能带着微笑
Sometimes, rain falls, and tears overflow. But days when things don't go according to plan, make me want to strive tomorrow.
时而会下雨、也会溢出泪水。但不如所愿的那一天,会决心努力在下一天

时而雨落,泪流。但不如所愿的日子,总让我决心要努力把握明天
The dream I've always had is to be someone who is free to do whatever she wants.
我一直看着一场梦,是另有一个我,想做的事都能自由做得到

我一直有个梦,想成为另一个自己,无拘无束
Life is a paper airplane, flying on with my wishes. Just progressing with all its might against the wind.
人生是纸飞机,载着愿望飞过去。在风中只管尽力(奋力)前进

Rather than compete for distance, how I flew, where do I fly to, those are the most important.
与其比比距离,不如怎样飞过,哪里飞过,这些才是重要吧

与其比距离远近,不如比怎样飞过,飞往哪里,这些才是最重要的吧


Come, like my heart, 365 days
来,随心做一下,365天
来吧,随着我的心,365天
(2) How many stars can I see? Or is it the night where nothing can be seen?
能看到多少星星,还是/抑或是 什么都看不到的夜晚

When I can't bring up my energy, I'll talk with someone.
精神无法振作起来,这样的时候,和谁谈谈吧

Humans are not as alone as they think. Just unable to notice the kindness right beside them.
人人身旁都有温柔,只不过他们没意识到

Life is a paper airplane, flying on with love. Everyone will look up these wings you spread with confidence.
人生是纸飞机,载着爱情飞着。大家将抬头看你自信展开的翅膀      仰望&看 can't be used at the same time

Even if you don't know how to fold one, you'll be able to let it fly without noticing. That is the hope and the motivation.
即使你现在不知折法,也不知不觉中能让它起飞,这就是希望吧

Come, like my heart, 365 days.
来吧,随着我的心,365天

Song:365日の紙飛行機
*也许会有专家/专业人士的翻译,但为学习,故自己也尝试着翻译一下。


时隔一年,再看你的当年的译稿,我心中有些感慨。好几次我想给你发消息,但是我没有发。我甚至不知现在在做什么……Ananas,你,还记得我吗?如果可以,我希望把新的自己带来,我想做许多积极的改变。就像你翻译的纸飞机,飞翔,总是能有希望。歌词我很喜欢,特别是‘人人身旁都有温柔 只不过他们没意识到’等等。我真的特别有感触。一年时间说短不短,说长不长,足以让我又明白一些道理。

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