Molly
Normally, life often drives me busy with a bunch of things and I forget to call my mom and my parents in law. Today, when I called them and told them that I have bought some gifts for them, they felt so happy at my a little surprise. They have been giving us a lot and I am although grateful as a habit but seem to take it for granted automatically in the other hand. They feel so happy just to take a call from me but I am lazy calling them sometimes. We can never love them the way they love us. I feel motivated with much love.
4 dic 2024 03:45
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Typically, life keeps me distracted with a bunch of things, so I forget to call my mom and my parents in law. Today, I finally called them and told them that I had bought them some gifts. They felt so happy. They have been giving us a lot, for which I am instinctively grateful. But, to them, I fear that I may seem ungrateful. They feel so happy each time I call them, but I neglect to do so sometimes. We can never show them the same love they show us. Perhaps the love I feel will motivate me better in the future. Saying both "normally" and "often" is repetitive. "So I forget" is better than "and I forget" because "so" establishes a relationship between cause and effect, whereas "and" does not. I don't understand "at my a little surprise" What you say is true. The older people are never thanked as much as they deserve. They accept it that way because they remember acting the same way when they were young. Don't worry about it too much. Let love be its own reward. Love doesn't demand reciprocity. Love doesn't keep a balance sheet. They don't need your gifts. You yourself are the reward they hoped for.
4 dicembre 2024
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Normally, life often keeps me busy with a bunch of things and I forget to call my mom and my parents in law. Today, when I called them and told them that I have bought some gifts for them, they were so happy at my little surprise. They have given us a lot and although I am grateful I seem to take it for granted automatically They feel so happy just to take a call from me but I am sometimes lazy about calling them. We can never love them the way they love us. I feel motivated with so much love.
4 dicembre 2024
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Normally, life often makes me busy with a bunch of things and I forget to call my mom and my parents in law. Today, when I called them and told them that I have bought some gifts for them, they felt so happy at my little surprise. They have been giving us a lot and although I am grateful as a habit, on the other hand I seem to take it for granted automatically.. They feel so happy just to take a call from me but I am lazy calling them sometimes. We can never love them the way they love us. I feel motivated by much love. Well done Mol. Nice work. Most of my changes are syntax (word order) so it sounds more natural.
4 dicembre 2024
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