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In this day and age Technology is fairly present in all aspects of our daily lives; we all could not really do without it at all at this stage. However, it also true that there is an increasing widespread concern about the use that young people, especially children, make of electronic devices, such as smartphones and tablets.
Personally speaking, parents should not allow their children to have access to them at a very tender age due to an unlimited usage of those devices could cause a negative impact on their mental health.
Firstly, what kids truly need is to have significant real experiences by manipulating objects and by interacting/engaging with their peers in their immediate environment. It is scientifically proven that a long-term exposure to digital screens and social media completely unsupervised would jeopardize their innate creativity and lead them to believe that the today’s digital world is in fact the real world.
Additionally, fewer and fewer adolescents are capable of maintaining visual contact with the others and, what is even worse, of taking an interest in current appeling topics since they would rather spend most of their time glued to those devices. Futhermore,the most serious/biggest concern is that they are increasingly showing learning difficulties and completely unacceptable behaviours which impact unfavourably on their personality development.
Taking all of this into consideration, parents should make severe rules about how much time their children devote themselves to that ever-changing virtual world and raise them awareness of spending some quality time closer to the natural world.
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