Kaori
90 day's training: Day 9 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I like to eat bread but I often eat rice because rice is healthy and much more reasonable than bread. 2) I eat bread a little more often recently because of nationaly lack of rice. It is caused by the bad weather last summer. 3) Our stock of rice is only 3 or 4 Kg now. We are expecting that this year's production will goes up and new rice come to supermarkets next month. 4) By the way, Japanese bread is mostly soft and a little airy. I prefer to German bread which more heavy and tight. 5) My favourite is sandwich with eggs, cheese, ham and lettuce. I wanted to buy it yesterday but all sandwiches were sold out.
2024年9月11日 09:10
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90 day's training: Day 9 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I like to eat bread but I often eat rice instead because it is healthier and much more reasonable than bread. [I don't understand what you mean by "reasonable". Are you thinking of price? quality? nutrition?] 2) I have been eating bread more frequently because of a national shortage of rice caused by last summer's bad weather. 3) Our stock of rice is only 3 or 4 kg now. We are expecting this year's production to go up and new rice to arrive in supermarkets next month. 4) By the way, Japanese bread is mostly soft and airy. I prefer it to German bread which is heavier and more dense. 5) My favorite dish is sandwich with eggs, cheese, ham and lettuce. I wanted to buy one yesterday but all sandwiches were sold out.
2024年9月11日 10:25
90 day's training: Day 9 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I like to eat bread but I often eat rice because rice is healthier than bread. 2) I recently started to eat bread a little more often because of the lack of rice nationally. It has been caused by bad weather last summer. 3) Our stock of rice is only 3 or 4 Kg now. We are expecting that this year's production will go up and fresh rice will come to our supermarkets next month. 4) By the way, Japanese bread is mostly soft and a little airy. I prefer it to German bread which is more heavy and compacted. 5) My favourite is a sandwich with eggs, cheese, ham and lettuce. I wanted to buy one yesterday but all the sandwiches were sold out.
Bread can't reason! But well done!! You could say IT is more reasonable to eat bread.
2024年9月11日 09:52
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