Hi, I need your support. Can you correct my English writings? •she is the most successful student in my class. • I like to explore in the library. • she asked me a question about knitting techniques.

Yui

Hi, I need your support. Can you correct my English writings? •she is the most successful student in my class. • I like to explore in the library. • she asked me a question about knitting techniques. • This is the word I try to understand in English. • We are learning about a weather at science class. • I’m not good at mathematics. • Knitting needs mathematics knowledge. I appreciate your suggestion. I don’t care how many corrections you have.

2024年9月7日 14:06

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Mercy

Hi, I need your support. Can you correct my English writings? •sMy answers are a bit different from Jonathan's. 1) She is the most successful student in my class. • (Capitalize the first letter in the first word of a sentence) 2) I like exploring the library. ( You wouldn't use "in" unless you are referring to something in the library, not just the library. I like to explore *books* in the library. I like to explore *music* in the library. • s3) She asked me a question about knitting techniques. • This is the word I try to understand in English. • (Same correction as your first sentence, capitalize the first letter) 4) This is a word I am trying to understand in English. (I think this what you want to say. Right now, your sentence doesn't make sense) 5) We are learning about a weather atin science class. • I’m not good at mathematics. • (Doesn't need an "a". No need for an indefinite article, "in" not "at") 6) We are learning about weather at science class. (Perfect) 7) Knitting needrequires mathematicsal knowledge. I appreciate your suggestion. I don’t care how many corrections you have ( "Need" doesn't work for your sentence. "Mathematics" doesn't fit in that tense). Let me know if that helps or if you have more questions.

2024年9月7日

Yui

Hello Mercy, Thank you for deep insight! I correct my writing based on your advice. “At” Science class is right? not “in” before Science. I have a question. I want to say that I stroll around library, what do you say using a word “explore”? I appreciate your help. Thanks!

2024年9月8日 · 回复

Jonathan

Hi, I need your support. Can you correct my English writings? •sShe is the most successful student in my class. • I like to explore in the library. • she asked me a question about knitting techniques. • This is the word I try to understand in English. (sounds strange. explain what you mean to say) • We are learning about a weather at sin Science class. • I’m not good at mathematics. • Knitting needrequires mathematicsal knowledge. I appreciate your suggestions. I don’t care how many corrections you might have.

2024年9月7日

Yui

Hello Jonathan, thank you for checking my many writing! I tried to use “word” in sentence. Then I did not come up idea, so I wrote this. • The word “ pleasant” is used when you want to express happy or satisfied. weather does not need a/ the? and Japanese weather is more clearly? thank you so much.

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