Pavithra Arul
No : 2
'Poongulam' is the name of the village. It means the flower garden. The name is very suitable for that place. We can see lots of flowers around us and the smell is divine. The different colour of flowers is the feast of our eyes. Wherever we see around us it is filled with green because of the river of poongulam just like blue spreads in the sky.
The two villagers spoke together about a person while sitting in a shiva's temple. They talked like he lost his love even though he had full rights to marry the woman and he is fearless. At the time, a man appeared from the pond side of the temple. He looked like 20 years old and had a very well trained physical appearance and a nice face cut. His name is 'Muthaiya'. They talked about him. He bathed in the pond and he saw a bull and playfully twisted its tail so it ran fast from the pond. Then he plucked a beautiful Lotus buds and flowers with leaves. He started to walk straight to the home.
2023年5月8日 14:54
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No : 2 'Poongulam' is the name of the village. It means the flower garden. The
name suits that place well. We can see lots of flowers around us and
the smell is divine. The different colours of flowers are a feast for our eyes.
Wherever we look we can see shades of green and blue because of the river of
poongulam. just like blue spreads in the sky. two villagers talked
about a person while sitting in shiva's temple. They talked as if he had lost his
love even though he could marry the woman and he is fearless. At
the time, a man appeared from the pond side of the temple. He looked about 20
years old and had a fit physical appearance and a nice face.
His name was 'Muthaiya'. They talked about him. He bathed in the pond and he saw
a bull and playfully twisted its tail so it ran fast from the pond. Then he
plucked a beautiful Lotus flower with leaves. He started to walk
straight to the home.
Wonderful post🍀
2023年5月8日
No : 2 'Poongulam' is the name of the village. It means the flower garden. The
name is very suitable for that place. We can see lots of flowers around us and
the smell is divine. The different colours of the flowers is the feast of our eyes.
Wherever we look around us is filled with green because of the river of
Poongulam. It is just like the blue in the sky. Two villagers spoke together
about a person while sitting in a shiva's temple. They talked about how he lost his
love even though he had full rights to marry the woman and he was fearless. At
the time, a man appeared from the pond side of the temple. He looked 20
years old and had a very nice physical appearance and a nice face.
His name was 'Muthaiya'. They talked about him. He bathed in the pond and he saw
a bull and playfully twisted its tail so it ran fast from the pond. Then he
plucked beautiful lotus buds and flowers with leaves. He started to walk
straight home.
I wasn’t sure what you meant to say in some parts of this, so I’m not sure I corrected everything according to the intentions you had when writing it.
2023年5月8日
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