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Lour Gomez
What do you think about this writing? (part 2) It is inexplicable what I felt when she told me. I had the feeling that it was my fault, that it was all my fault. I completely fainted. But then I understood who the real culprit was. I knew Oliver was arrogant, narcissistic, selfish, and idiotic, but I never believed that he would be the murderer of my ex-wife. Hearing that Gillian had committed suicide because of the unhappiness of her marriage, a fury grew immensely over me. I got Mme Wyatt to tell me where they lived and headed there. I banged on the door incessantly until he opened it. There it was him, Oliver, with his stupid victim face. I pounced on him and started hitting him in anger so that my fists started bleeding. "You! You killed her son of a bit**! She chose you! You just had to make her happy! " When I woke up from the trance of rage in which I had succumbed, the neighbors had already called the police, and I realized what I had done. No, I don't regret killing Oliver. But what I'll never forgive myself for is making him and Gillian meet.
2021年6月14日 21:28
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Trevin Stahly
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What do you think about this writing? (part 2) It is inexplicable what I felt when she told me. I had the feeling that it was my fault, that it was all my fault. I completely fainted. But then I understood who the real culprit was. I knew Oliver was arrogant, narcissistic, selfish, and idiotic, but I never believed that he would be the murderer of my ex-wife. y ex-wife’s murderer. Hearing that Gillian had committed suicide because of the unhappiness ofin her marriage, a fury grew immensely over me. I got M.me Wyatt to tell me where they lived and headed there. I banged on the door incessantly until he opened it. There ithe was him, Oliver, with his stupid victim face. I pounced on him and started hitting him in anger so that until my fists started bleeding. "You! You killed her you son of a bit**! She chose you! You just had to make her happy! " When I woke up from the trance of rage into which I had succumbed, the neighbors had already called the police, and I realized what I had done. No, I don't regret killing Oliver. But what I'll never forgive myself for is making him and Gillian meet.
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Very dark story...
2021年6月14日
Trevin Stahly
I have to correct my correction—it should say “my wife’s murderer”, not “the my wife’s murderer”
2021年6月14日 · 回复
Lour Gomez
Haha yes. It is a made-up continuation of the novel "Talking it over" by Julian Barnes.
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What do you think about this writing? (part 2) It is inexplicable what I felt when she told me. I had the feeling that it was my fault, that it was all my fault. I completely fainted. B but then I understood who the real culprit was. I knew Oliver was arrogant, narcissistic, selfish, and idiotic, but I never believed that he would be the murderer of my ex-wife. Hearing that Gillian had committed suicide because of the unhappiness of her marriage, a fury grew immensely over me. I got Mme Wyatt to tell me where they lived and headed there. I banged on the door incessantly until he opened it. There it was him, Oliver, with his stupid victim face. I pounced on him and started hitting him in anger so that my fists started bleeding. "You! You killed her son of a bit**! She chose you! You just had to make her happy! " When I woke up from the trance of rage in which I had succumbed, the neighbors had already called the police, and I realized what I had done. No, I don't regret killing Oliver. But what I'll never forgive myself for is making him and Gillian meet.
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Excellent!
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