Nao
I draw the water color picture. My feeling is calm. I’m free from many worries. I draw the picture and I look at my mind. The color is softly and clear. The color of clear makes me pure.
2022年7月20日 12:34
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I paint watercolor pictures. I feel calm. I’m free from many worries. I paint the pictures and I look into my mind. The color is soft and clear. The clear colors make me pure. (or maybe 'make me feel pure'?)
I am learning to use watercolor paints for the first time :) When we talk about watercolors, we need to use the verb 'paint', not 'draw'. We use 'draw' for ink/pen, pencil, colored pencil, and usually with soft/hard pastel chalk. 'Paint' is a verb we use with wet mediums like acrylic, oil, tempera, and watercolor paints. I hope this helps. Enjoy your painting :)
2022年7月20日
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I drew/am drawing a water color picture. I feel calm. I’m free from many worries. When I draw the picture, I look at my mind. The color is soft and clear. The clear color makes me feel(?) pure.
Hi, here are some suggested corrections. Please keep in mind that these are merely suggestions–and you don't need to take them if I've misrepresented what you intended to write. The difference between past tense and present continuous is that you are either referring to a water color that you drew in the past, or you're referring to drawing a water color in the moment. Below, you also wrote, "when I draw the picture . . . " suggesting that perhaps this is a pastime that relaxes you in general? It's a little unclear. I hope this helps! Keep practicing your writing!
2022年7月20日
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