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An infantile paralysis was carrying a pack basket and selling the tissue on street. One bag of tissue dropped from his pack basket because he staggered. It is difficult for him to collect it . A pupil saw this scene and offered to help him pick it up . Then this pupil run towards the group of his classmates and they discussed something. The truth is that they didn’t laugh at that paralysis together instead they talked about whether they should buy some tissues from that paralysis. Yes they did . How lovely and kind they are . They are so pure and full of sympathies
2025年3月10日 01:06
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A polio survivor was carrying a pack and selling tissues on street. One bag of tissues fell from his pack because he staggered. It was difficult for him to pick it up. A pupil saw this scene and offered to help him pick it up. Then this pupil ran towards the group of his classmates, and they discussed something. The weren't laughing at the boy with polio, but instead talked about whether they should buy some tissues from him. They did. How lovely and kind they were. They were so pure and full of sympathy
PARALYSIS is the condition of being paralyzed, not the person suffering from the condition. Nice story! PACK or BASKET; not PACK BASKET. Try to use the same tense throughout.
2025年3月10日 05:48
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