toranj
Would you please correct my mistakes in this passage? First of all I want thanks Dr.A from his help and his advise. He have taken a great deal off my shoulders, and I appreciate it. If he never been it would hard for me to start this way. This website inspired from a thought. Actually I have been starting to learn new program such as: Python, HTML, CSS, UI & UX, Machine Learning and… And because of that I want to write my daily learn and share with you to give your advice and watch your sides of view. It’s my pleasure to receive your attention and help me in this way and see your comments and also feedbacks at below.
2021年10月1日 09:29
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Hi, Toranj! I hope this helps 😊 First of all, I would like to thank Dr.A for his help and advice. He has taken a great weight off my shoulders, and I appreciate it. If he hadn't been so helpful, it would have been hard for me to start this way. This website was inspired by a thought. I have also been starting to learn new programs such as Python, HTML, CSS, UI & UX, Machine Learning, etc. I would like to share my improvement with you to get your advice. I greatly appreciate your help and feedback. I look forward to reading your comments.
2021年10月1日
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I have added more 'improvements' than "corrections" to this text.... As the context is not really clear, I can't guarantee that I have reflected what you wanted to say exactly.... First of all, I want thank Dr. A for his help and advice. He has taken a great deal off my shoulders, and I appreciate that. Without his support, it would have been hard for me to achieve what I have. This website was inspired by a thought. Actually I have begun to learn new program such as: Python, HTML, CSS, UI & UX, Machine Learning and… [...NOT SURE I FULLY UNDERSTAND THIS PARAGRAPH...] And because of that, I want to do more to share my daily learning journey, points of view, and received any helpful advice. I'm grateful for your interest and especially for your help in this matter. Please see the comments and feedback below.
2021年10月1日
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Hello Toranj, I hope that this message finds you well. Yes, I am able to correct the errors in your paragraph. From what I see you need to improve on your English grammar and vocabulary, but aside from that I must congratulate you on having good spelling though. Feel welcome to view my profile, watch my video and book a trial lesson so I can help you more attentively. I hope to chat to you soon, take care.
2021年10月1日
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