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Forgive me, if I have hurt you knowingly or unknowingly. If I had ignored you intentionally or unintentionally. If I had said something bad about you directly or through someone else. I'm sorry for all the pain I have caused you and if you had cried any day or felt bad because of me. It's better to clear our souls so that out fasts and duas be accepted I will do the same for you.
2023年3月28日 09:25
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Forgive me, if I have hurt you knowingly or unknowingly, if I ignored you intentionally or unintentionally. If I said something bad about you directly or through someone else. I'm sorry for all the pain I caused you and if you cried any day/at any time or felt bad because of me. It's better to clear our souls so that our fasts and duas be accepted. [<-- good use of subjunctive.] I will do the same for you.
Good. Just note that you are using the past perfect inappropriately. Instead, try to use it when talking about something in the past that had already occurred previously when some event in the past simple happens.
2023年3月28日
Forget me, if I have hurt you knowing or unknowing. If I had ignored you intentionally or unintentionally. If I had said something bad about you directly or through someone else. I'm sorry for all the pain I have caused you and if you had cried any day or felt bad because of me. It's better to clear our souls so that out fasts and duas be accepted I will do the same for you.
2023年3月28日
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