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『I come from Fuyang Anhui provience and I was born in the countryside .Actually, there are no famous tourist attractions. So,I want to talk about the changes of my home village. When I was very young, the road in the village was dirt and narrow ,the house was small and low .Since there were no street lights, the whole village was in darkness at night .However, recent years, great changes have taken place in my home village, every family has built their own new house which is high and spacious, the goverment has built a concrete road and installed street lights for my home village ,Now ,my village looks neat and bright at night.I feel very happy and proud to witness these changes.』