Kuma
Today, I'm going to work part-time job at a donuts shop. There are a lot of delicious donuts. Please come, everyone!!
2025年4月20日 06:39
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Today, I'm going to work part-time at a donut shop. There are a lot of delicious donuts, so please come, everyone!
Hello Kuma! It's great to hear that you're working at a donut shop today! You did a wonderful job sharing your excitement about the delicious donuts and inviting others to join you. For improvement, try to be careful with your sentence structure for clarity. Keep enjoying your job and sharing your experiences!
2025年4月20日 20:58
Today, I'm going to work part-time at a donuts shop. They make a lot of delicious donuts. Please come and try a few, everyone!!
2025年4月20日 08:50
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