Giovanna Perri
First of all I think there are a lot of people that do not believe in climate changing and politics too.
I try to do my best where I live reciclying rubbish, trying not to buy on line clothes, reducing the use of plastic.
But this is not much and I'm aware that to do something significant for the planet we all should invest in renewable energy, electric but nuclear too.
2025年3月22日 09:46
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First of all, I think many people do not believe in climate change or politics. I try my best to be environmentally conscious by recycling rubbish, avoiding online clothing purchases, and reducing my use of plastic. However, I’m aware that these small efforts alone are not enough. To make a significant impact on the planet, we should all invest in renewable energy—not only electric but also nuclear.
1. “Climate changing” → “Climate change”: The correct term is “climate change,” not “climate changing.”
2. “Politics too” → “or politics”: “Or” fits better in this context.
3. “Reciclying” → “Recycling”: Spelling correction.
4. “Not to buy on line clothes” → “Avoiding online clothing purchases”: More natural phrasing.
5. “Reducing the use of plastic” → “Reducing my use of plastic”: “My use” makes it more personal.
6. “But this is not much and I’m aware” → “However, I’m aware that these small efforts alone are not enough”: More natural and structured.
7. “Electric but nuclear too” → “Not only electric but also nuclear”: Improved phrasing for clarity.
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2025年3月23日 12:50
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First of all I think there are a lot of people who do not believe in climate change and politics too.
I try to do my best where I live, recycling rubbish, trying not to buy clothes on line , reducing the use of plastic.
But this is not much and I'm aware that to do something significant for the planet we all should invest in renewable energy, electric but nuclear too.
2025年3月22日 14:11
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