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Please correct my Japanese! ( romajî)

I prepared myself to take a video  for my Japanese friend. I’d like to talk Japanese so I make some sentences about what I want to say.  And please correct me. 

Konnichiwa Haruka SAN!

Hajimeru mae ni, Anaya no jikan o arigatō.

Haruka SAN wa daijōbu desu ka?

Anata ga genkide arimasu yō ni. 

Genzai watashi wa unten menkyo shutoku no junbi o shite imasu.

Sugini daigaku ni modorimasu, kotoshi sotsugyō shimasu. Dakara watashi wa sukoshi kōfun shite imasu. Keikaku- dōri ni saubete ga daijōbu ni naru koto o negate imasu.

Saizen o tsukushimasu.

Saikin watashi wa nihon no daigaku o sagashiteimasu. Daigaku no kyōju no hitori to hanashi o shimasu. 

Rainen, nihon no daigaku ni shinsei shimasu mochiron Mashi subete ga keikaku-dōri naraba, watashi wa 2020 nen ni nihongo ni narimasu. 

Watashi wa Nihon no orinpikku o  mitai! 

Jibun o sewa shite Kudasai! Arigatō gozaimashita!

2018年8月27日 16:43
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Hi! Nice to meet you! You're Japanese is pretty good, though it took me a bit to read it. I'm not used to romaji.

There wasn't much to fix, but I'm just going to paste the whole thing.


<pre class="tw-data-text tw-ta tw-text-small" data-placeholder="" id="tw-source-rmn" data-fulltext="" dir="ltr" style="unicode-bidi: isolate; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); border-width: initial; border-style: none; border-color: initial; padding: 0px 0.14em 0px 0px; position: relative; margin-bottom: 0px; resize: none; font-family: inherit; overflow: hidden; width: 276px; white-space: pre-wrap; height: 504px; font-size: 16px !important; line-height: 24px !important;">Kon'nichiwa hajimeru mae ni, anata no jikan o arigatōgozaimasu. Daijōbudesuka. Anata ga genkidearimasu yō ni. Genzai, watashi wa unten menkyo shutoku no junbi shite imasu. Mōsugu ni, daigaku ni modorimasu. Kotoshi sotsugyō shimasu. Dakara, watashi wa sukoshi kōfun shite imasu. Keikakudōri ni naru koto o negatte imasu. Saizen o tsukushimasu. Saikin watashi wa nihon'nodaigaku o sagashi hajimarimashita. Daigaku no kyōju no hitori to hanashi o shimasu. Rainen, nihon'nodaigaku ni shinsei o shimasu. Mochiron, mashi subete ga keikakudōrinaraba, watashi wa 2020-nen ni nihongo ga tokui ni narimasu. Watashi wa Nihon de orinpikku o mitai. Jibun o sewa shite kudasai. Arigatōgozaimashita.</pre>
2018年8月27日