李梦桐
Future Vision and Teaching Aspirations
Where do you see yourself in the next few years, and how does volunteering as a teacher at our school align with your personal and professional goals? Please share how this opportunity fits into your plans for growth and contribution.
I can use volunteering to get all the experience I need, to get my certifications, and then I can transit into teaching. while I am volunteering, you see my determination and all that, you would train me. I can volunteer for me to get into teaching.
2025年3月18日 09:36
修正 · 1
Future Vision and Teaching Aspirations Where do you see yourself in the next few
years, and how does volunteering as a teacher at our school align with your
personal and professional goals? Please share how this opportunity fits into
your plans for growth and contribution.
I see volunteering as an opportunity to gain the experience I need, earn my certifications, and then transition into teaching. While volunteering, you will see my determination and dedication, and you will train me. I can volunteer to gain the skills necessary to enter the teaching profession.
1. “Get all the experience I need” → “Gain the experience I need”: “Gain” sounds more natural in this context.
2. “To get my certifications” → “Earn my certifications”: “Earn” is the correct verb for certifications.
3. “Then I can transit into teaching” → “then transition into teaching”: “Transit” is incorrect here; “transition into” is the proper phrase.
4. “While I am volunteering, you see my determination and all that, you would train me” → “While volunteering, you will see my determination and dedication, and you will train me”: More professional and grammatically correct. “All that” was vague and unnecessary.
5. “I can volunteer for me to get into teaching” → “I can volunteer to gain the skills necessary to enter the teaching profession”: This makes the sentence clearer and more formal.
Additionally, to strengthen your communication skills, you could benefit from private lessons with a tutor (like me!).
2025年3月19日 22:04
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