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The ways to protect animals and plants Our planet is not safe place for animals and plants. Thousand of species have become extinct and many more are now endangered. One of the main treats to the survival of many plants and animals is idustrialisation. This causes pollution and acid rain, which destroy forests and harm many species of plant. Another treats is man! We are destroying the animals natural habitats and polluting environment so there is nowhere for them to live or find food. We need to do something fast before it is too late for them. Firstly, I think we can try to clean up our environment. The less pollution we produce, the more chance animals have of surviving. Another solution is to create more national parks and conservation areas. This would be allow animals to live and breed safely in their natural habitats. As a result, their numbers would increase and species would not die out. In conclusion, there are many ways to make our world a batter place for animals and plants. We all need to do whatever we can!
2013年3月21日 19:10
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The Ways to protect animals and plants

Our planet is not safe place for animals and plants. Thousands of planet species have become extinct and many more are now becoming endangered.

One of the main treats to the survival of many plants and animals is Idustrialisation. This , which causes pollution and acid rain, which destroys forests and harm many species of plant harms many planet species.
Another treats is, the human race, ourselves. We are destroying the animals' natural habitats and polluting the environment so there is nowhere for them to it is hard for them to find a place to live or find food. We, as a nation, need to do something fast before it is too late for them.
Firstly, I think we can try The Russian Federation needs to think of a way to clean up our environment.  Less pollution we produced, the means more increasing the chance animals have of surviving.
Another solution is to create more national parks and conservation areas. This would be allow animals to live and breed safely in their natural habitats. As a result, their numbers would increase and species would not die out  thrive.
In conclusion, there are many ways to make our world a batter place for animals and plants. We all need to do whatever we can!  Everyone just needs to do what they can to help.

2013年3月21日

The ways to protect animals and plants (? How to protect animals and plants)

Our planet is not a safe place for animals and plants. Thousand of species have become extinct and many more are now endangered.
One of the main treats threats to the survival of many plants and animals is idustrialisation industrialisation. This causes pollution and acid rain, which destroy forests and harm many species of plants.
Another treats threat is man (?humans)! We are destroying the animals natural habitats natural habitats of animals / animals' natural habitats and polluting the environment so there is nowhere for them to live or find food. We need to do something fast before it is too late for them.
Firstly, I think we can try to clean up our environment. The less pollution we produce, the more chance animals have of surviving.
Another solution is to create more national parks and conservation areas. This would be allow animals to live and breed safely in their natural habitats. As a result, their numbers would increase and endangered species would not die out.
In conclusion, there are many ways to make our world a batter place for animals and plants. We all need to do whatever we can!

 

 

2013年3月21日

<em>Just one minor correction to add to those above:</em>

 

The ways to protect animals and plants

Our planet is not safe place for animals and plants. Thousand of species have become extinct and many more are now endangered.
One of the main treats to the survival of many plants and animals is idustrialisation. This causes pollution and acid rain, which destroy forests and harm many species of plant.
Another treats is man! We are destroying the animals natural habitats and polluting environment so there is nowhere for them to live or find food. We need to do something fast before it is too late for them.
Firstly, I think we can try to clean up our environment. The less pollution we produce, the more chance animals have of surviving.
Another solution is to create more national parks and conservation areas. This would be allow animals to live and breed safely in their natural habitats. As a result, their numbers would increase and species would not die out.
In conclusion, there are many ways to make our world a batter better place for animals and plants. We all need to do whatever we can!

 

2013年3月22日
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