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Essay: "Playing computer games is a waste of time" "Playing computer games is a wate of time" Computer games' industry have been growing up since many years ago. Since computers and games stations are been improved very quickly, many companies are putting a great capital and time in it. From my point of view, This investment is good for this industry, because the games will be more educative, productive and funny. On the one hand, games, and particularly computer games, are become more and more sophisticated, furthermore, there is much more variety for all ages. Due to this, the companies have to mark their games with age tags appropiate for each different age. For example, +18 or +7. Appart of this, the graphic quality is being better that even we can confuse it with a film. On the other hand, the abbuse of any kind of computer games, obviously, could injury you. For example, a boy or girl, who spend a lot of ime playing computer games, could become careless with his7her studies. In order to avoid it, we should organize the time which they spent playing computer games. Let me conclude by saying, not only are computer games good for education and development of your children if we use them properly; but also your children have fun with it while you are doing your duties.
2014年8月19日 21:36
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Essay: "Playing computer games is a waste of time"

"Playing computer games is a waste of time" 

The computer game industry has been growing for many years. Since computers and gamestations have been improved often, we know many companies are putting a great capital and time in them (computers and gamestations). From my point of view, this investment is good for this industry, because the games will be more educational, productive and funny.

On the one hand, games, and particularly computer games, are becoming more and more sophisticated, furthermore, there is much more variety for all ages. Due to this, the companies have to mark their games with age tags appropiate for each different age. For example, +18 or +7. Apart from this, the graphic quality is better to the point that even we can even confuse it with a film.
On the other hand, the abuse of any kind of computer games, obviously, could hurt those playing them. For example, a boy or girl, who spends a lot of time playing computer games, could become careless with his or her studies. In order to avoid these problems, time spent playing computer games should be limited.

Let me conclude by saying, not only are computer games good for education and development of your children if we use them properly; but also your children have fun with it while you are doing your duties (are getting things done).

2014年8月20日

Essay: "Playing computer games is a waste of time"

"Playing computer games is a waste of time"

The computer games industry has been growing up since for many years ago. Since computers and game stations have are been improved very quickly, many companies are putting a great deal of capital and time in it. From my point of view, this investment is good for this industry because the games will be more educational, productive and fun. ny. (divertido)

On the one hand, games, and particularly computer games, are becoming more and more sophisticated; furthermore, there is much more variety for all ages. Due to this, the companies have to mark their games with age tags appropiate for each the different ages.  For example, +18 or +7. Apart from this, the graphic quality is being better that even has improved so much that we can confuse it with a film.

On the other hand, the abuse of any kind of computer game, (cualquier tipo de juego) obviously, could injure you (o be harmful). For example, a boy or girl who spends a lot of tme playing computer games could become careless with his or her studies. In order to avoid this, we should organize regulate the time which they spend playing computer games.

Let me conclude by saying that not only are computer games good for education and development of your children if we use them properly but also that your children can have fun with them (los juegos) while you are doing your duties chores.

2014年8月21日
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