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Tomorrow. It will rain tomorrow. It's extremely probably it will rain tomorrow. If the weather forecast doesn't go wrong, it will go to rain tomorrow. And if it would rain tomorrow, nobody at the open-air restaurant by the river would work. Almost twenty men and women usually work there on summer Sundays. None of them wants to it rains. Their Sunday's job is in danger. It is for that nobody wants to it rains. Today it has been a cold, windy, and uncomfortable day. Tomorrow will be worst. It is 3:00 AM so tomorrow is already today. Today it will rain and it is very late. I think I will go to bed. Night.
2015年6月14日 00:57
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Tomorrow.

It will rain tomorrow. It extremely (1) most probably it will rain tomorrow. If the weather forecast doesn't go wrong change, it will go to (2) rain tomorrow. And, if it would will rain tomorrow, nobody no one (3) at the open-air restaurant by the river would will work. Almost twenty men and women usually work there on summer Sundays(4). None of them (5)wants to it rains. Their Sunday's job is in danger. It is for this reason that nobody wants to it rains. Today it has been a cold, windy, and uncomfortable day. Tomorrow will be worst worse. It is 3:00 AM so tomorrow is already today.
Today it will rain and it is very late. I think I will go to bed.
Night(6).

 

1. Extremely is an adj used more for something intense, very great. You could say "It MOST probably will rain tomorrow".

2. You can use "going to rain" OR "it will rain", but not both.

3. You could use "nobody". "no one" sounds better to my ears.

4. I like what you wrote here,  - very poetic - but I'm not sure it is what you meant to write. I think you meant " ..."work there on Sundays in the summer. But again I like "on summer Sundays".

5. You can say "No one WANTS it to rain" or you can say "None of them WANT it to rain". Also, rain is not plural in this context. It RAINS (present) It WILL rain, It DID rain...I want it TO rain..

6. O.K. Americans ALWAYS say 'Night (with the little apostrophe which means' something is missing). So I am really fine with "night. I guess more correct would be Good Night.

 

good work - 'night. :-)

2015年6月14日

Tomorrow.

It will rain tomorrow. 

It's extremely probably probable/likely (es probable que) that it will rain tomorrow. (probably = probablemente)

If the weather forecast doesn't go isn't wrong, it will go to rain tomorrow.

o: If the weather forecast is accurate, it is going to rain tomorrow.

And if it would does rain tomorrow, nobody at the open-air restaurant by the river would will (o, will be able to) work.

Almost twenty men and women usually work there on summer Sundays.

None of them wants to it to rains. (They don't want it to rain.)

Their Sunday's job (more common to say "Sunday job" using Sunday as an adjective) is in danger.

It is for that reason that nobody wants to it rains it to rain(o: Because of that, nobody wants it to rain.)  Por eso = for that reason, because of that

Today it has been a cold, windy, and uncomfortable day.

Tomorrow will be worse. (peor = worsE) It is 3:00 AM, so tomorrow is already today.
Today it will rain and it is very late.

I think I will go to bed.
(Good) Night.

2015年6月14日
Tomorrow. It will rain tomorrow. It's extremely probably it will rain tomorrow. If the weather forecast doesn't go wrong, it will go to rain tomorrow. And if it would rain tomorrow, nobody at the open-air restaurant by the river would work. Almost twenty men and women usually work there on summer Sundays. None of them wants to it rains. Their Sunday's job is in danger. It is for that nobody wants to it rains. Today it has been a cold, windy, and uncomfortable day. Tomorrow will be worst. It is 3:00 AM so tomorrow is already today. Today it will rain and it is very late. I think I will go to bed. Night. Good evening have a presentation about Sequence Tense How do i go about it …..need help
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Tomorrow. It will rain tomorrow. It's extremely probably it will rain tomorrow. If the weather forecast doesn't go wrong, it will go to rain tomorrow. And if it would rain tomorrow, nobody at the open-air restaurant by the river would work. Almost twenty men and women usually work there on summer Sundays. None of them wants to it rains. Their Sunday's job is in danger. It is for that nobody wants to it rains. Today it has been a cold, windy, and uncomfortable day. Tomorrow will be worst. It is 3:00 AM so tomorrow is already today. Today it will rain and it is very late. I think I will go to bed. Night.
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Tomorrow. It will rain tomorrow. It's extremely probably it will rain tomorrow. If the weather forecast doesn't go wrong, it will go to rain tomorrow. And if it would rain tomorrow, nobody at the open-air restaurant by the river would work. Almost twenty men and women usually work there on summer Sundays. None of them wants to it rains. Their Sunday's job is in danger. It is for that nobody wants to it rains. Today it has been a cold, windy, and uncomfortable day. Tomorrow will be worst. It is 3:00 AM so tomorrow is already today. Today it will rain and it is very late. I think I will go to bed. Night.hi every
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