Niwantha
Is this sentence grammatically correct?
Hi friends,
Is this sentence grammatically correct? (context: this is a finding of an audit which should go to a report).
The manner that the allowance has been described in letter of appointment is not in line with the law.
Thanks in advance,
Niwantha
2019年5月2日 08:51
解答 · 5
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Hi there,
My proposed answer as below:
The nature of the allowance as described in the appointment letter is not in line (or consistent) with the law (or regulation).
If this is related to accounting policy, regulation may be more appropriate.
Cheers
Rene
2019年5月2日
1
Just one small change is necessary.
"the letter", rather than "letter".
"The manner that the allowance has been described in the letter of appointment is not in line with the law."
2019年5月2日
I'd suggest changing "manner" to "way", to avoid the need for an ugly repetition of "in" in the middle of your sentence :)
2019年5月2日
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