李梦桐
I hope you are doing well. Sorry for bothering you again! Do you if there is another way to reach out Naomi besides Messenger? My VPN was not working today so I couldn’t attend the meeting. as I told you that my Messenger was not working last week, I’ve already sent emails to David and Anna to apologize, but I couldn’t find Naomi‘s email. Thank you very much and have a nice weekend. 
2025年3月23日 03:13
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Subject: Alternative Way to Contact Naomi Hi [Recipient’s Name], I hope you’re doing well. Sorry to bother you again! Do you know if there is another way to reach Naomi besides Messenger? My VPN wasn’t working today, so I couldn’t attend the meeting. As I mentioned last week, my Messenger was also not working. I’ve already sent emails to David and Anna to apologize, but I couldn’t find Naomi’s email. Thank you very much, and have a great weekend! Best, [Your Name]
1. “Do you if there is” → “Do you know if there is”: Fixed missing word. 2. “My VPN was not working today so I couldn’t attend the meeting.” → “My VPN wasn’t working today, so I couldn’t attend the meeting.”: • “Was not” → “Wasn’t” (more natural). • Added a comma before “so” for clarity. 3. “as I told you that my Messenger was not working last week” → “As I mentioned last week, my Messenger was also not working.”: • “as I told you that” is awkward; “As I mentioned” is smoother. • Added “also” for clarity. 4. “I’ve already sent emails to David and Anna to apologize, but I couldn’t find Naomi‘s email.”: • No major grammar issues, but slight rewording could improve flow. 5. “Thank you very much and have a nice weekend.” → “Thank you very much, and have a great weekend!”: • Added a comma. • “Nice weekend” → “Great weekend” (more natural). If you want to refine your writing and sound even more natural in English, I’d be happy to help! Book a conversation lesson with me to practice.
2025年3月23日 12:44
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