Viviana
What would be your perfect weekend?
My perfect weekend would be going to the mountains and spending the whole time in the nature. Nature is so relaxing and it allows you to free/clear your mind and also helps you to get rid of all the stress you have accumulated over the week.
It would be nice to spend some quality time with the whole family too. Most of us are free during weekends so it's easier to gather around a set table and enjoy a rich meal together.
Sometimes, after a hectic week, I feel the need to just stay at home and chill out. In this case, doing absolutely nothing would be perfect!
2023年11月1日 17:55
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What would be your perfect weekend? My perfect weekend would be going to the
mountains and spending the whole time in nature. Nature is so relaxing and
it allows you to free/clear your mind and also helps you to get rid of all the
stress you have accumulated over the week. It would be nice to spend some
quality time with the whole family too. Most of us are free during weekends so
it's easier to gather around a set table and enjoy a rich meal together.
Sometimes, after a hectic week, I feel the need to just stay at home and chill
out. In this case, doing absolutely nothing would be perfect!
The only correction I made was “in nature,” because normally we only use “the” to refer to something specific, and your example refers to nature in general. You did a really great job!
2023年11月1日
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