Here’s a corrected and slightly polished version of your writing: Yesterday, I was able to knit a garment without worrying about anything or getting distracted. Then, I realized how much knitting has saved my life. First, it clears my mind. Recently, I’ve been learning English seriously and making it a habit, so I focus more on studying than on my free time. I find it hard to stay focused on the present moment. Knitting, however, refreshes me. Second, it brings me joy. I’m currently making a muffler, and it’s almost finished—I only need to knit a few more rows. When a garment starts to take shape, I feel a sense of confidence and happiness. Knitting is like meditation for me. It suits me well, and it makes my life better. The yarn and needles calm me down, and seeing my finished work makes me smile. Sometimes the patterns are challenging, but it’s worth the effort. I really enjoy knitting.

Hello there, I want you to correct my writing. Yesterday, I was able to knit a garment without worrying and thinking about things. Then, I realized how much knitting has been a life saver to me! (or: how much knitting has saved my life!) Firstly, it clears my head. Recently I have been learning English seriously and making a habit of it, so I care about my English more than i do my free time. However I struggle to stay focused on whatever it is I am doing now. So I found that knitting makes me feel refreshed. (or: knitting refreshes me) Secondly, I feel pleasant. Currently, I am making a muffler, and it is almost finished, just as soon as I have knitted a few more rows. When a garment is taking shape, you feel confidence and happiness (or: confident and happy). Knitting is like a meditation for me. It suits me and turns my life into a better one. Because yarns and needles calm me down, and seeing the finished works makes me smile. Sometimes patterns are difficult, but it is a worthwhile trying. So I like Knitting.