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Could you check my text please? Loosing a game. Loosing a game is a very upsetting thing for me, since I’m a pretty gambling person when it comes to sports. Today I knocked out in the first round of the main yearly tennis tournament that’s called “Major Cup” by a tough opponent, who definitely was more experienced than me. The game wasn’t hopeless, I had quite several actively won points and showed my defensive skills, but anyways the opponent was too strong for me. Since I knew he is more stable in rallies than I am, my game plan was to play actively and attack every time when I see the chance. But after several games I understood that this plan doesn´t give me much benefit. So that I decided to play stable trying to prolong each point as much as I can. It made the game more equal, but didn´t turn the game around. Now, after my knock out I should break it down and think which elements I need to work on. Even though it´s always dissapointing to lose games, I definitely can take advantage of that looking for a room for improvement. Thanks!

Hello. Yesterday was payday, and I finally received my salary. I had been waiting for this day because my wallet was getting lighter and lighter. After checking my bank account, I felt a small sense of relief. I immediately started thinking about how to use the money. Recently, the weather has become cooler, and I realized that I don’t have a proper jacket for autumn and winter. I saw some stylish outerwear online, like wool coats and down jackets, and now I can’t stop thinking about buying one. I want something warm but fashionable, something I can wear both to university and part-time work. Still, I’m trying to be careful not to spend too much. Maybe I should wait until the sale starts next month. Saving money is important, but rewarding myself a little also feels good. Finding that balance is always the hardest part.

The qualification exam is only four days away. I think passing this year may be difficult, but I want to do my best. Studying is not easy, but I enjoy it. I want to push myself hard in the last few days. I will try to make this time valuable and aim to pass the exam on the first try. Even if it is hard, I will not give up. I will study more today and keep going. I believe effort is important. I want to feel proud after the exam. I will focus and use my time well. This is my final chance to improve. I hope my hard work will help me succeed. Today, I will do my best again. Let's go!

Hello. Today, I had an interview of part-time job. It was the most difficult interview I’ve ever hard because it was group interview and we answered many questions in an hour. The questions were all specific ones that required concrete answers, but I think I answered every one accurately. So I believe I had a good interview. It's a highly competitive interview, but I hope I get in. After that, I went to my friend's university and met up with my friend. Lately, I've been busy with university and my part-time job, so we haven't been able to meet as often. It was really great to finally see you again, catch up on everything, and make plans to go to Disney together!

What do you think makes me want to eat in autumn? That is “Kaki 柿”,Japanese persimmons. According to some data, 70 percent of “Japanese Kaki “are astringent persimmons. I thought astringent persimmons was too astringent to eat, but actually there are some ways to get rid of the astringency. By the way, “Shibugaki 渋柿”, astringent persimmons is also called sour persimmon in English. “Shibugaki” and sour taste completely different, so I wondered why they are the same word.

Sugar is not good for our health, there are more contraindications than benefits. Causes dental deterioration, insulin resistance, weight gain, cholesterol increase, is addictive, causes inflammation, impact in our mental health. At this time, everyone knows that sugar is bad for health. but is so difficult to leave it, sometimes. Especially when you go to the bakery, there are a lot of pastries, cakes, it's too tempting. There are others options like stevia, tagatose and allulose healthier than sugar, but of course, more expensive. Inclusive, there are some special gourmet bakeries that don't use sugar. In my case, I have reduced consumption of sugar, I drink just tea, infusions, and just sweeten the coffee. 50 grs is the maximum recommended by OMS.

I like doing Apple Fitness workouts and I try do do it at least once a week

This week, I saw very sad news to me. First, My favorite baseball player's retire. His name is Hisayoshi Chono. He played at Yomiuri Giants. I don't like that team, but I like Chono. When I was a child, I usually imitate his batting form. His batting form seems to very cool to me. He is sincere and kind person. He was rejected to joining other teams at 2 times. Then, he practiced harder and harder. Because he thaught that to make them feel glad they chose him. Another episode, he practice English and Spanish to communicate foreign player. Because they can quickly become accustomed to the team.

Hellow everyone! I'm a bit nervous about taking the TOEIC next month. The results might not come right away, but I feel my daily studying is gradually building my knowledge. I'm making positive efforts. I've also decided to take the Korean Language Proficiency Test Level 3. I've been interested in Korean language and culture since elementary school, and learning it is enjoyable. Watching numerous Korean dramas via subscription services during the pandemic sparked my desire to understand Korean naturally. I've made Korean friends, and through international exchange, I've discovered new values and aspects of myself. Entering my sophomore year, opportunities to think about my future have greatly increased at university and elsewhere. I hope to pursue a career where I can utilize these experiences. I want to enjoy both my studies and leisure time, and make these last two months of the year ones where I can look back and feel I gave it my all.