SIN KA HIM, Perry
I think study abroad will be a good experenice for people who can explore different cultures, reigions and food from other countries. Embracing all these stuff can upgrade one's recongnition to the world and make friends from different backgrounds. I didn't ask parents for study aboard because i understand that it costs a lot for the study fee and accommodation, i think life without parents will be difficult because we cannot take care of each other and i enjoy the time with parents. Living with schoolmates will be one of a funny part when study aboard, people have to learn how to take care themselves such as cooking, tidy up, cleaning and time management, everythings will be depending on yourself. At that moment, People will find out life is not easy, every little things were done by parents in the past that now will consume your energy and time. For the most worthwhile things is getting around with different people, the language ability will be enhanced in a short time, and the social network of your will be influencial to your future. Thank you
2024年10月29日 04:57
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I think studying abroad will be a good experience for people who can explore different cultures, regions and food from other countries. Embracing all these things can improve one's knowledge of the world and help you make friends from different backgrounds. I didn't ask my parents to study aboard because I understand that it costs a lot for the study fees and accommodation, I think life without/away from parents will be difficult because we cannot take care of each other and i enjoy the time with my parents. Living with schoolmates will be one funny thing about studying aboard, people have to learn how to take care of themselves such as cooking, tidying up, cleaning and time management, everything will be depending on yourself. At that moment, People will find out life is not easy, every little things that were done by your parents in the past now will consume your energy and time. The most worthwhile things will be is meeting different people, your language ability will be enhanced in a short time, and your social network will be influencial to your future. Thank you
Well done. A nice ambitious piece of writing. Don’t be sad about so many corrections. Many were typos. And the others were mostly because you tried to write well, ambitious use of grammar etc, so it’s totally natural to make a few mistakes. That’s why we experiment! Learn from them and you will keep improving.
2024年10月29日 08:20
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