wendy
I have just finished a seven days busy business trip yesterday.In the last week,I have traveled over 4,000 kilometres totally.Because of my full schedule,I couldn't squeeze anytime to learn English which makes me feel anxious.You know that when you are focus on doing a thing,indolence and excuses are our big enemies that can defeat us in silence.So,today is a new start which refers to my determination of keeping learning English.I hope that my friend Pierre can see me and help me.he is a great teacher and helped me a lot.Spring is a marvelous season which is the beginning of a year and is the best time to make some resolutions and just do them.
2023年3月12日 01:33
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I just finished a busy seven day business trip yesterday. In the last week, I traveled over 4,000 kilometers in total. Because of my full schedule, I couldn't squeeze in time to learn English, which makes me feel anxious. You know that when you are trying to focus on doing something, indolence and making excuses are big enemies that can undermine you. So, today I am renewing of my determination to continue learning English. I hope that my friend Pierre can see me and help me. He is a great teacher and has helped me a lot. Spring is a marvelous season which we can think of as a beginning for a new year. It offers us an ideal opportunity to make resolutions and resolve to stick to them.
2023年3月12日
I finished (when the action is completed and when you use a time marker such as “yesterday” to precisely place the action on the time line, use the simple past) a seven days busy business trip yesterday. In the last week, I have traveled over 4,000 kilometers in total. Because of my full schedule, I couldn't squeeze in a single moment to learn English which makes me feel anxious. You know that when you are focused on doing something, indolence and excuses are your biggest enemies and silently deceive you. So, today is a new start which symbolizes my determination to keep learning English. I hope that my friend Pierre can see this and help me. He is a great teacher and has helped me a lot. Spring is a marvelous season which is the beginning of a new year and is the best time to make some resolutions and stick to them.
Thank you, Wendy, I’m glad to help 😊. As Sophia said, don’t be too harsh on yourself, sometimes life happens and priorities can change. You’re doing a great job, keep it up.
2023年3月12日
Yesterday I finished a busy seven day business trip. In the last week, I have traveled over 4,000 kilometres in total. Because of my full schedule, I couldn't squeeze in any time to learn English, which makes me feel anxious. You know that when you are focused on doing something indolence and excuses are our big enemies that can defeat us in silence. So, today is a new start which refers to my determination of keeping learning English. I hope that my friend Pierre can see this and help me. He is a great teacher and has helped me a lot. Spring is a marvelous season, which is the beginning of a year and is the best time to make some resolutions and just do them.
I'm not entirely sure what you mean by 'refer' in this context. Maybe you mean to say "which proves my determination to keep learning English"? Anyway, be kind to yourself, you're doing great work!
2023年3月12日
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