Tanvir Rahman
The last movie a watched was Jack Reacher. It's an action and thriller type movie where Jack is the hero acted by Tom Cruise. This movie started with a man killed 5 people from a parking lot. James Barr, who is accused of killing thoese five people, asked for Jack Reacher who was a military investigator and investigate James murder in Bagdad. When Jack come to see James in hospital, he meets with James Lawyer.
2021年4月24日 22:20
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The last movie a watched was Jack Reacher. It's an action and thriller type movie where Jack is the hero acted by Tom Cruise. This movie starts with a man who kills five people in a parking lot. James Barr, who is accused of killing those five people, asks for Jack Reacher--a military investigator--to investigate James's murder in Baghdad. When Jack comes to see James in the hospital, he meets with James Lawyer.
"action and thriller type movie" --> This can be condensed into "action-thriller movie" or just "action thriller." It helps to keep your writing to one tense. I added some punctuation so that the writing is clearer and more grammatical.
2021年4月25日
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