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It's really important to protect our environment because it can impact not only our health but also it ruins the nature of beauty.
In order to protect the environment, firstly, we should stop using plastic and try to use the items that are environmentally friendly. For instance when we go shopping, we should use tote bags instead of using plastic. We can't cut back on using plastic immediately but we can reduce using them.
Secondly, when we throw trash we need to throw it systematically. It would be best if we recycle the trash instead of burning it. Otherwise, we had better plant trees so that we can eliminate air pollution.
To sum it up, I'd say that if we do these kinds of things the world will be a better place not only for us but also for our next generations.
2025年3月17日 05:48
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It's really important to protect our environment because it can impact not only our health but also it ruins the beauty of nature.
In order to protect the environment, firstly, we should stop using plastic and try to use those items that are environmentally friendly. For instance when we go shopping, we should use tote bags instead of using plastic ones. We can't cut back on using plastic altogether, but we can reduce its use.
Secondly, when we get rid of trash we need to sort it. It would be best if we recycle most of the trash instead of burning it. We should also plant trees so that we can eliminate air pollution.
To sum up, I'd say that if we do these kinds of things the world will be a better place not only for us but also for the next generations.
2025年3月17日 10:45
It is essential to protect our environment, as it affects not only our health but also the beauty of nature.
To safeguard the environment, we should first reduce our use of plastic and opt for environmentally friendly alternatives. For example, when shopping, we should use tote bags instead of plastic ones. While eliminating plastic use entirely may not be feasible immediately, we can gradually reduce our reliance on it.
Secondly, waste disposal should be done systematically. Ideally, we should recycle rather than burn waste, as burning contributes to air pollution. Additionally, planting trees can help mitigate pollution and improve air quality.
In conclusion, if we take these steps, we can make the world a better place—not only for ourselves but also for future generations.
Focus on clarity and conciseness. Avoid redundant phrases like “using plastic immediately but we can reduce using them”—instead, say “eliminating plastic use immediately may not be feasible, but we can gradually reduce it.” Also, ensure logical flow; for example, “it ruins the nature of beauty” should be “it affects the beauty of nature.” Keep refining your sentences for smooth readability.
2025年3月17日 09:12
It's really important to protect our environment because it can impact not only
our health but also it ruins the nature of beauty. In order to protect the
environment, firstly, we should stop using plastic and try to use the items that
are environmentally friendly. For instance, when we go shopping, we should use
tote bags instead of using plastic. We can't cut back on using plastic
immediately but we can reduce using it. Secondly, when we throw trash we need
to throw it systematically. It would be best if we recycle the trash instead of
burning it. Otherwise, we had better plant trees so that we can eliminate air
pollution. To sum it up, I'd say that if we do these kinds of things the world
will be a better place not only for us but also for our next generations.
2025年3月17日 06:11
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