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Chapter1 Sophie couldn’t sleep because of the bright moonbeam. She’s been awake in her bed for hours, she got out of her bed to close the curtains by her bed eventually. Suddenly, she wondered how the street looks like in the very late night, so she leaned out of the window and saw something very tall and black and thin. Chapter2-3 It seemed a person. He would stop in front of houses and peer in and move on. In front of a house, he put something out of his suitcase, it looked like a trumpet, and blew it out through into the window. Sopie was watching what he did. That moment, their eyes met. Then he came to and took her somewhere. Chapter4 Sopie and the giant person arrived at a cave after they are running for a long time. It was almost a dawn. They went to inside of the cave and he let her go down on the ground. She was scared of that he would eat her.
2021年1月14日 05:58
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Chapter1 Sophie couldn’t sleep because of the bright moonbeam. She’d been awake in her bed for hours, eventually, she got out of her bed to close the curtains by her bed. Suddenly, she wondered how the street looked (or what the street looks like) in the very late night, so she leaned out of the window and saw something very tall and black and thin. Chapter2-3 It seemed to be a person. He would stop in front of houses and peer in and move on. In front of a house, he pulled something out of his suitcase, it looked like a trumpet, and blew through it into the window. Sophie was watching what he did (or watching his every movement). That moment, their eyes met. (For some reason. I can’t add more edits - but nice job! Lovely story) Then I’d he came to and took her somewhere. Chapter4 Sopie and the giant person arrived at a cave after they are running for a long time. It was almost a dawn. They went to inside of the cave and he let her go down on the ground. She was scared of that he would eat her.
2021年1月14日
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