Batoul Obaidah
Tuesday,15.3.2025 I wake up at three o'clock a.m .The weaher was very cold,so l prepared a hot drink that was herbs.Then l practiced English language for one hour. After that l had felt tired , so l slept again. When I got up , l helped my mum to make the house better then we had breakfast . In the afternoon,Our neighbour visit us . We drank coffee , ate tamer and took about many topics . About five o'clock, my mother's friend called her for walking in the park,and l studied for two hours . After my mum had arrive at the home , we had lunch . Then we watched T.V . In general, it was a nice day and i am thankful for everyting my life.
2025年4月16日 04:39
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Tuesday,15.3.2025 I woke up at three o'clock a.m .The weather was very cold,so l prepared a hot drink that was herbs.Then l practiced English language for one hour. After that l had felt tired , so l slept again. When I got up , l helped my mum to make the house better/do the housework, then we had breakfast . In the afternoon, our neighbour visited us . We drank coffee , ate tamer and talked about many topics . Around five o'clock, my mother's friend called on her to go for a walk in the park,and l studied for two hours . After my mum had arrived home , we had lunch . Then we watched T.V . In general, it was a nice day and i am thankful for everything my life. Not bad, well done. Your tenses need some work. Be consistent, keep it in the past tense here as you’re talking about past events. But well done, you write well and confidently. Keep practicing. Good luck
2025年4月16日 07:49
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