There are many historical landmarks in my country , I had visited most of it . In South my country there are marshes , In the middle there are holy places like Imam Ali Shrine and Imam Hussein and Ima

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There are many historical landmarks in my country , I had visited most of it . In South my country there are marshes , In the middle there are holy places like Imam Ali Shrine and Imam Hussein and Imam Abbas shrine those the messenger Muhammad grandsons and there are ishtar gate and Antiquities of Babylon . And in the North there are summer resorts. And the best place for me are Antiquities of Babylon.

2022年3月14日 11:59

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There are many historical landmarks in my country , I have visited most of them . In the south of my country there are marshes , in the middle there are holy places like Imam Ali Shrine and Imam Hussein and Imam Abbas shrine who are the messenger Muhammad grandsons and there are also ishtar gate and Antiquities of Babylon. In the North there are summer resorts. The best place for me is Antiquities of Babylon.

Good work - just a couple of change to make it sound more natural. Any questions, let me know :)

2022年3月14日

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