Yumi
I live in tokyo Japan. It started fall season here. I feel crisp air in the morning. It's below 15 degrees. We need jaket and skarf. I love this weater because we can enjoy weinter clothes!!!
2024年11月8日 09:08
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I live in Tokyo Japan (capital T). The fall/autumn season has started here. (Make fall the subject of the sentence) I feel crisp air in the mornings. (More than one morning) It's below 15 degrees. We need a jacket and scarf. I love this weather because we can enjoy winter clothes!!! Well done Yumi. A few typos I’ve corrected. And a few other suggestions too. Hope they help. Simon
2024年11月8日 09:44
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I live in Tokyo, Japan. Fall has just started here and I can feel the crisp/fresh/invigorating air in the morning. It's below 15 degrees. We need to wear jackets and scarfs and I love this weather because we can enjoy winter clothes!!!
2024年11月8日 09:44
I live in Tokyo, Japan. Fall has arrived here. The air is crisp in the mornings. It's 15 degrees below zero (-15). We need a jacket and scarf. I love this weather because we can enjoy wearing winter clothes!!!
2024年11月11日 02:09
招待者
I live in tokyo Japan. It started fall season here. I feel crisp air in the morning. It's below 15 degrees. We need jaket and skarf. I love this weater because we can enjoy weinter clothes!!!
2024年11月8日 09:13
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