Nguyen Thu Huong
Describe an unforgettable trip you once made (Many thanks for your help ^^)

ð      I will tell you an unforgettable trip that I once made two years ago.  That was the first trip that I have spend my vacation time to travel alone for 10 days to some nature areas in Vietnam. It was the last day of my trip when I was being in a sand hill in Mui Ne, Phan Thiet Vietnam. When I was feeling the beauty of this seesight, was taking picture for myself, the sky became suddenly dark. The wind was being so strong and sands were putting on my face. Because it was the end of the afternoon, it didn’t have many people there. So I was so scary. I didn’t know how I could do. I took rapidly my motorbike to come back to the center of Mui Ne. It was about 20 km from there. When it was raining heavily, I drove my motorbike on the coastal road. I was crying and was imagining many bad things. Because, one side was mountains and th other was the deep sea. I thought that I could be fell into the sea and… Oh I don’t dare think about that now.
Fortunately, I was fine and came back to the hotel. I learned that It should track weather forecasts before any trip.<o:p></o:p>

2018年6月21日 07:35
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Hello Nguyen, I would recommend you to post this texts in the notebook instead of posting them as a discussion. It is so much easier to make corrections in the notebook.
2018年6月21日
oh thank you ^^ although that, could you help me check this text? 
2018年6月21日