Maud
yesterday is my birthday yesterday was my birthday. i want to say it's so happiness with my friends. if everyday is my birthday,i think i will be the most happiness person in the world. 3.Aug,the day is my favorites.so i like summer,too. i wish that everybody will have a nice summer in this year.
2011年8月4日 04:21
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yesterday was my birthday

yesterday was my birthday.
I want to say it was  so happy to be with my friends.
if everyday is my birthday,i think i will be the most happiest person in the world.
3.Aug is my favorite day.so i like summer,too.
I wish that everybody will have a nice summer in this year.

2011年8月4日

Hi Maud! My native language is Russian and I just study English. But I’d like to correct your text. And may be afterword someone native speaking person will correct both: yours and mine. My text is purple colored. Good luck to you and me!

yesterday is my birthday     It was my birthday yesterday.

yesterday was my birthday. It was my birthday yesterday.
i want to say it's so happiness with my friends. I'd like to say it's so good to party with my friends.
if everyday is my birthday,i think i will be the most happiness person in the world. If everyday should be my birthday, I think, I'll be the most happy man in the world!
3.Aug,the day is my favorites.so i like summer,too. The 3d of August is my favorite day and I like summer at all too. i wish that everybody will have a nice summer in this year. I wish everybody to have nice summer this year!

2011年8月4日
Happy birthday to you, I hope my belessing will not be late to you. :)
2011年8月4日
thank you so much........ :)
2011年8月4日
i will do no correction.... just wish u a late....HaPpY BiRtHdAy........... :)
2011年8月4日
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