can you help me to correct this eassy？ There were a lot of shocking news about depression last year. Many celebrities have committed suicide because of depression. It contained Korean female star Shirley. Depression is a neglected mental illness, its severity is often underestimated. According to reports, more than one hundred million people in China suffer from different degrees of depression. What an amazing number! Unfortunately, less than 10 percent of people with depression are diagnosed and treated effectively in China. I don’t know what this number is in other countries.I think behind this reflects certain social problems. Chinese young people are under great pressure. Stress comes from their job, finance ,marriage and so on. Everyone tries their best to survive.They live in a tense atmosphere even have no time to settle down and read a book or listen to a song. China is still a developing country which made a great progress economically, it still have a lot of work to do. China was an imperial state until the end of Qing dynasty, ancient Chinese traditional thought and culture had a great influence on modern China. China needs time to change some of its old concepts and establish and improve a new social system. Whatever,I believe everything will go in a good direction.