Юлия Степанова
プロの講師
Gymnast Son Yeon Jae and Figure Skater Kim Yu-Na Have you seen the performances of Korean rhythmic gymnast Son Yeon Jae on the Olympic games in London? She placed at fifth because of one unfortunate mistake with clubs. If she would catch her clubs, she would be for sure one of the medalist. I think everybody who saw her remember her exquisite performances. She really enjoyed what she did and everybody felt it. Watching her, I recalled another Korean athlete, Kim Yu-Na, a figure skater, who got a gold medal in Vacouver Olympic games. Both are very graceful, beautiful, emotional and make their performances in such way that everybody think it is not the sport but the art.
2012年8月13日 14:12
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Gymnast Son Yeon-Jae and Figure Skater Kim Yu-Na

Have you seen the performances by Korean rhythmic gymnast Son Yeon Jae at the London Olympic games?
She finished fifth in the final because of one unfortunate mistake,failing to catch both clubs she threw up int the air. If she would have caught her clubs, she would have gotten a medal for sure.
I think everybody who watched her performance would remember how exquisite she was. She really enjoyed what she did and everybody felt that.
She reminds me of another Korean athlete, Kim Yu-Na, a figure skater who got a gold medal in Vacouver Olympic games.
They are both very graceful, beautiful, and emotional.They also make their performances in such ways that everybody think it is art instead of sport.

2012年8月14日
I feel that most of "performance" in this text I must chang to "programme", mustn't I?
2012年8月14日
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