andrew chili
i would be happy to meet you ;) my name is andrew. i'm trying to learn Еnglish . My native languages are Ukrainian and russian, and I grew up in Ukraine. i enjoy sports and music ;) i wish you peace, love and happiness!
2012年8月18日 09:02
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I would be happy to meet you! ;)

My name is Andrew. i'm trying to learn Еnglish . My native languages are Ukrainian and Russian, and I grew up in Ukraine.
i enjoy sports and music. ;)
I wish you peace, love and happiness!

 

A great introduction, Andrew!  Just some punctuation needed adjusting.

 

Also, the word <em>sports</em> becomes <em>sport</em> in British English - so choose whichever one you want. :)


Chris

2012年8月19日
nice to meet you too!
2012年8月19日

I would be happy to meet you! ;)
My name is Andrew. i'm trying to learn Еnglish . My native languages are Ukrainian and Russian, and I grew up in Ukraine. 
i enjoy sports and music. ;)
I wish you peace, love and happiness!

2012年8月19日
Привет ! очень приятно ) Hi Andrew :) nice to meet you !
2012年8月18日
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