Many people think that the best way to travel is by car.

I'm learning to write an opinion essay. It shouId have five paragraphs and be formal. I would appreciate it if you could correct it.

Nowadays more and more people have cars and travelling by car is getting ["get' is a very general verb.  When you're speaking, it's fine.  But when you are writing, word choice is more important because you have time to think about the words you use.  Try "become"] more popular. A great number of people choose this way [can you think of a more specific word?] of travelling and consider it the best one.

As for me, I do not like travelling by car. I had to do it [another way to say "travel by car" is "road trip"  try using that to avoid too much repetition] about five times and I hated it. First, it [you could talk about the "passanger seat.'  I would use the plural to indicate that all of the passanger seats in the car are uncomfortable] is not comfortable because there is quite little space in a car. I felt it , especially, when we had [were you forced to cleep in the car, or did you want to sleep in the car?] to sleep in it. Second, it is very dusty on the road and my face, my hair and my hands got filthy very soon ["quickly" would be better]. Third, there is no toilet in a car and we had to stop every time [Your meaning is not clear. Do you mean that you had to stop at a petrol station every time you wanted to wash your hands or use the toilet.  Or do you mean that everytime you came to a petrol station you had to stop?] at petrol stations to go to the toilet and wash our hands.

However, a lot of people feel quite comfortable while travelling by car, and they do not pay attention to such little inconveniences. They are glad to travel alone, or only with their families , or friends, and they prefer not to have annoying strange fellow travellers nearby. They also like that they can stop at any time to relax, or get off out of the car and take photos of some beautiful scenery.

Comfort still stands for me in the first place. What is more, I prefer to travel faster . For this reason I usually go by plane. [You need more in this paragraph. Provide some details about why flying is better than driving.]

To sum up, I can say that it is up to you how to travel. Personally, I prefer to do it in the most comfortable conditions and get to my destination as soon as possible . After that I can relax, go sightseeing, take photos and have a good time.