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Write a short story with 5 adjectives, 5 adverbs and 5 time expressions I'm a bit lost with time expressions, I'm not really sure what they are. Here's my short story, any corrections will be appreciated. ********************* It was eleven o’clock at night when the phone rang. I had had a tough day so I needed to sleep. When I picked up the phone, it was George. “What do you want?.” I said sharply. He only calls when he needs something. “Listen, I run out of gasoline and I need your help.” He seemed worried. Eventually I got up from bed, changed my clothes and got quickly into the car. When I arrived to where he was, we went to the nearest gas station, at that time It was starting to rain. Then he asked me for money to buy gasoline. At that moment, I started to get very angry… but I lend him 10 euros so we can finish, and he could go and I could finally rest and sleep. We went to his battered car, it was raining very hard, and we were soon completely soaked. Then he started the car and went off. When I got back home, I saw people inside my house. Walking carefully I saw George just when I realized It was my birthday, and they had organized a party for me!
2015年1月16日 20:12
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Write a short story with 5 adjectives, 5 adverbs and 5 time expressions

I'm a bit lost with time expressions, I'm not really sure what they are. Here's my short story, any corrections will be appreciated.

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It was eleven o’clock at night when the phone rang. I had had a tough day so I needed to sleep.
When I picked up the phone, it was George.

“What do you want?.” I said sharply. He only calls when he needs something.
“Listen, I ran out of gasoline and I need your help.” He seemed worried.

Eventually I got up from bed, changed my clothes and got quickly into the car.

When I arrived to where he was, we went to the nearest gas station. At the time it had started to rain. Then he asked me for money to buy gasoline. At that moment I started to get very angry… but I lended him 10 euros so we could finish, he could go and I could finally rest and sleep.

We went to his battered car, it was raining very hard, and we were soon completely soaked. Then he started the car and went off.

When I got back home I saw people inside my house. Walking carefully I saw George. Just when I realized It was my birthday and they had organized a party for me!

2015年1月17日
Write a short story with 5 adjectives, 5 adverbs and 5 time expressions I'm a bit lost with time expressions, I'm not really sure what they are. Here's my short story, any corrections will be appreciated. ********************* It was eleven o’clock at night when the phone rang. I had had a tough day so I needed to sleep. When I picked up the phone, it was George. “What do you want?.” I said sharply. He only calls when he needs something. “Listen, I run out of gasoline and I need your help.” He seemed worried. Eventually I got up from bed, changed my clothes and got quickly into the car. When I arrived to where he was, we went to the nearest gas station, at that time It was starting to rain. Then he asked me for money to buy gasoline. At that moment, I started to get very angry… but I lend him 10 euros so we can finish, and he could go and I could finally rest and sleep. We went to his battered car, it was raining very hard, and we were soon completely soaked. Then he started the car and went off. When I got back home, I saw people inside my house. Walking carefully I saw George just when I realized It was my birthday, and they had organized a party for me!
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