Postcrossing

Have you heard about this awesome website: www.postcrossing.com? You can receive postcards from all over the world, that is, if you send a postcard first. Every postcard you receive will be registered on this website. I am a member of this website. I found out about it from a book. This website was shown in a good way to us, i.e. to connect the world, which we can get to know better through different cultures and lifestyles. I will try to send my first postcard. It's really funny, but I look forward to receiving postcards from all over the world. It's said that there are over 218 countries have been in this lines? Let us join this big family now.

中文版本：你有听说过这个很牛的网站吗，www.postcrossing.com,寄出一张明信片的参与者可以收到至少一张来自其他国家参与者的明信片，当我从一本书上获取到这个网站我就立马去注册成为会员了，它提供给我们更好的途径去认识这个世界，让我能有机会去了解不同文化与生活方式，我将试着去寄出我的第一张明信片，这是件很好玩的事情，我期待收到世界各地的明信片,据说有218个国家参与了这个活动，让我们都来加入这个大家庭把。

"Postcrossing" 這个字不是正宗英文字, 是个自創的公司名称, 因此要用在 " 符号的裡面

Have you heard this awesome website, www.postcrossing.com. You can may recieve other postcards from all over the world ,if when you send one a postcard firstly.__Every postcard you Each one [you] recieved will be registered on this website. I am a member of this website Once I get know it /found this out/got wind out/ from a book, I quickly registered to be a member.__This website shown on a is a good way to for us to see connect the world ,which I can and let me get to know better about the different cultures and how others live.  [正宗翻译是, This place gives us a better path to know this world and an opportunity to understand different cultures and lifestyles]  ways of living.__I will try to send my first postcard.  it's really funny This is very interesting and I look forward to reciveing  receive them  postcards from all over the world.[在英文寫作式, 这是太囉嗦了] __It's is said that there are over [中文版沒有此意]218 countries participated in this activity.  have been in this lines Let us join this big family now.

With your Chinese version, you can compare the difference in how it is expressed in English and how a translation works :)  Good job.

中文版本：你有听说过这个很牛的网站吗，www.postcrossing.com,寄出一张明信片的参与者可以收到至少一张来自其他国家参与者的明信片，当我从一本书上获取到这个网站我就立马去注册成为会员了，它提供给我们更好的途径去认识这个世界，让我能有机会去了解不同文化与生活方式，我将试着去寄出我的第一张明信片，这是件很好玩的事情，我期待收到世界各地的明信片,据说有218个国家参与了这个活动，让我们都来加入这个大家庭把。