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It’s challenging for me to get a good grade on English homework or tests because they often ask me to write a long sentences on various topics. I always give up writing 300 to 600 words essays in English. Although I like learning English so much, I don’t like English tests.
And It’s difficult for me to make a long lasting language partner because of my parsonality. I’m quite shy and scared to talk with people in English.
Thank you.
2025年3月20日 13:37
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I find it challenging to achieve high grades on my English homework and tests, as they often require me to write long sentences on various topics. I frequently struggle with writing essays of 300 to 600 words in English and often give up. Although I greatly enjoy learning English, I do not particularly like English tests.
Moreover, it is difficult for me to form long-lasting language partnerships due to my personality. I am quite shy and often feel nervous about speaking with others in English.
Thank you.
A useful tip for improving your writing, especially for academic or formal contexts, is to break down longer sentences into clear, structured ideas. Instead of forcing long sentences, focus on clarity and flow. For example, in your original text, “I always give up writing 300 to 600 words essays in English” became “I frequently struggle with writing essays of 300 to 600 words in English and often give up.” This makes the idea clearer and more natural. Try reading your writing out loud—if a sentence feels too long or unnatural, break it up or rephrase it. Also, using linking words like however, moreover, or therefore can make your writing smoother.
2025年3月20日 15:04
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It’s challenging for me to get good grades on English homework or tests because
they often ask me to write long sentences on various topics. I always give up
writing 300 to 600 word essays in English. Although I like learning English so
much, I don’t like English tests. And It’s difficult for me to make a long
lasting language partner because of my personality. I’m quite shy and scared to
talk with people in English. Thank you.
よく書けていますよ。✨ すごく共感できますよ。私も日本語を勉強するのが好きなのに、日本語の試験とか結構苦手なんです。今年JLPTN1（日本語能力試験）を挑戦したいなと思いますので、毎日ガチで勉強しています。自分のペースが良いですよ。無理のない範囲で英語の勉強頑張ってくださいね！
2025年3月20日 23:14
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It’s challenging for me / I struggle to get good grades on my English homework or tests because my teachers often ask me to write long essays on various topics. I always give up on writing essays in English between 300 and 600 words. Although I like learning English a lot, I don’t like English tests.
Besides, it’s difficult for me to keep a language partner for long because of my personality. I’m quite shy and scared to talk with people in English.
Thank you.
I hope you'll manage to find a language partner with whom you'll feel comfortable enough.
2025年3月20日 18:25
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It’s challenging for me to get a good grade in my English homework or tests because
they often ask me to write long sentences on various topics. I always give up
writing 300 to 600 words essays in English. Although I like learning English so
much, I don’t like English tests. And It’s difficult for me to make a long
lasting language partner because of my personality. I’m quite shy and scared to
talk with people in English. Thank you.
Well done. You write well. I hope my corrections help. Now try hard to conquer your shyness and start speaking to others in English. You won’t regret! Teacher Simon
2025年3月20日 13:57
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