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There is no doubt that people all around the world use social media apps most every day. People in different countries have their own favourite apps for communicating. When we open these kinds of apps, we have a lot of online friends., and we have joined into a variety of groups for talking about different topics which usally refer to work, life, education,food etc...... In China, the social media app we use most called Wechat. It is a tool that not only for chatting,but also for payment, watching video or doing business. We can do everything via it. Our lives have been changed a lot since it was created 12 years ago. It was developed to make everyone's life to be convenient. In fact, we are not happy to spend our life only with a phone. Our life should be full of a plenty of interesting things. Cooking food is more excited than ordering takeouts. Having a walk in a park is heathier than watching videos all day long. So, a thing which is popular doesn't represent that it's right!
2024年11月12日 03:57
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There is no doubt that people all around the world use social media apps almost every day. People in different countries have their own favorite apps for communicating. When we open these kinds of apps, we have a lot of online friends, and we have joined a variety of groups to talk about different topics that usually refer to work, life, education, food, etc. In China, the social media app we use the most is called WeChat. It is a tool that is not only for chatting but also for payments, watching videos, or doing business. We can do everything via it. Our lives have changed a lot since it was created 12 years ago. It was developed to make everyone's life more convenient. In fact, we are not happy spending our lives only with a phone. Our lives should be full of plenty of interesting things. Cooking food is more exciting than ordering takeout. Taking a walk in a park is healthier than watching videos all day long. So, just because something is popular doesn't mean it's right! Some of key corrections I made: "most every day" → "almost every day" (more common phrase). "favourite" → "favorite" (American English spelling; use "favourite" if British English is preferred). "joined into a variety of groups for talking about" → "joined a variety of groups to talk about" (corrected phrasing). "usally" → "usually" (spelling correction). "etc......" → "etc." (correct punctuation). "the social media app we use most called Wechat." → "the social media app we use the most is called WeChat." (added "is" for clarity and corrected capitalization). "not only for chatting,but also for payment, watching video or doing business." → "not only for chatting but also for payments, watching videos, or doing business." (corrected punctuation and pluralized terms). "Our lives have been changed a lot since it was created" → "Our lives have changed a lot since it was created." (simplified tense). "to be convenient." → "more convenient." (corrected phrasing).
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2024年11月12日 11:26
There is no doubt that people all around the world use social media apps almost every day. People in different countries have their own favourite apps for communicating. When we open these kinds of apps, we connect with a lot of online friends and we join a variety of groups for talking about different topics which usually refer to work, life, education, food etc... In China, the social media app we use the most is called Wechat. It is not only a tool for chatting, but also for payment, watching videos or doing business. We can do everything via it. Our lives have been changed a lot since it was created 12 years ago. It was developed to make everyone's life more convenient. In fact, we are not happy to spend most of our life on our phone. Our life should be full of interesting things. Cooking food is more exciting than ordering takeouts. Having a walk in a park is healthier than watching videos all day long. So, a thing which is popular doesn’t represent what is right!
2024年11月12日 09:06
There is no doubt that people all around the world use social media apps the most every day. People in different countries have their own favourite apps for communicating. When we open these kinds of apps, we have a lot of online friends, and we have joined into a variety of groups for talking about different topics such as work, life, education, food, etc...... In China, the social media app we use the most is called Wechat. It is a tool that is used not only for chatting, but also for making payments, watching videos or doing business. We can do everything via it. Our lives have changed a lot since it was created 12 years ago. It was developed to make everyone's life convenient. In fact, we are not happy to spend our life only on our phone. Our life should be full of plenty of interesting things. Cooking food is more exciting than ordering takeout. Going for a walk in a park is healthier than watching videos all day long. So, something being popular doesn't always mean that it's right!
Well done. It is not necessary to put "apps" after social media - you can just say "social media," but it's not grammatically incorrect, so I've left it there for you.
2024年11月12日 05:35
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