Olga
Please help me improve this sentence "The problem of xxx continues to attract great attention of researchers." I'd like some advice on this sentence, it is supposed to be an introductory phrase in a scientific paper. I'm not sure whether it sounds natural...
2019年8月10日 22:50
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"The problem of xxx continues to attract great attention of researchers." "continues to attract great attention"... This part of the sentence is fine. In fact, you will see it in a lot of scientific papers. "of researchers"... is not correct. You could say "from researchers". So one way to fix your sentence is this... "The problem of xxx continues to attract great attention from researchers." But an even nicer way is to write it like this... "The problem of xxx continues to attract considerable and increasing attention from researchers." (leave out the "and increasing" part if this is not true).
2019年8月11日
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Another way to say it is: The problem of xxx continues to be a subject of great interest to researchers. I personally find this version slightly smoother reading than your original, but it's just a subjective preference. Another thing you can do to improve it is making "researchers" more specific, like "behavioral science researchers" for example.
2019年8月11日
The problem of xxx continues to attract the attention of researchers. The problem of xxx continues to be a great attraction to researchers.
2019年8月10日
Good job! That sentence does sound very natural. It is a good introductory sentence and I hope you get a good mark on your paper!
2019年8月10日
is that it continues to attract more researchers.
2019年8月10日
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