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Can someone correct this IELTS writing test for me? Thank you so much :D During the last decades, trends for leisure activities of the elderly in Europe have changed significantly. The number of people partaking in some of these activities, such as hiking and surfing the internet, has been increasing through the years, making hiking the most popular activity for elder people, reaching the 80% of people doing it. While surfing the internet, for obvious reasons, was not a very popular activity before the 2000s, it reached the 50% of the population in the 2010s. On the other hand, activities such as reading, theatre and playing sports do not have a constant increasing tendency during the same period: moments of popularity alternate to moments of decrease. As a matter of fact, theatre, that during the 80s was chosen as a free time activity by the 50% of the people, started becoming less popular around the 90s, but slowly coming back to its former percentage. Overall, all these activities were more popular in the 2010s than in the 80s, except for theatre.
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