Mina
The school taught us many lessons in our life. It is we who have to do the challenges, but not so many students are capable of it. Some are still afraid to do their tasks and worry about it.
2023年4月5日 06:07
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School taught us many lessons in our life (maybe should be "life lessons" depending on meaning). It is we who have to do/undergo the challenges, but not so many students are capable of it/ready for it. Some are still afraid to do their tasks and worry about it.
Overall, I cannot complain about your grammar. It's hard to find specific fault. But even so this paragraph comes across difficult to understand. For example, we would not normally end a thought with just "challenges". We would specify which challenges. The "challenges of life"? In the same way, I don't know what you mean by "tasks" exactly. The grammar and the sentence are correct, but I just don't know what you mean.
2023年4月5日
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The school taught us many lessons in life. It is up to us to face challenges, but not all students are capable of doing so. Some are still afraid to complete their tasks and worry about them.
The correction includes a few minor changes to improve the clarity and accuracy of the sentence. "Lessons in our life" has been changed to "lessons in life" as it is not necessary to specify "our". The phrase "it is we who have to do the challenges" has been changed to "it is up to us to face challenges" to make it clearer. Additionally, "not so many students are capable of it" has been changed to "not all students are capable of doing so" to be more precise. Lastly, "worry about it" has been changed to "worry about them" to agree with "tasks".
2023年4月7日
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